Horrid grammar, so you may want to get a beta.
Also, the dialog and story itself seems really forced, so you may want to work on your writing skills before attempting to post something, as there is no flow to the fanfic.
Try writing more to improve the quality of your work, and then start posting once you have a solid base of skills. This site is a bit harsher in the quality we look for than FFN, so try a few more sites and get more input before posting here.
Keep writing, and I look forward to reading more from you in the future!
It's a nice story so far, but did you beta it? I found a few spelling errors and grammar errors, so maybe beta-ing a chapter before you post it might be helpful ^__^
I like the story idea, but the grammar is terrible.
enjoyed the story! cool!!! :)
Hi I really like your story.Will they ever notice the necklaces?I bet Ginny freaks and says the necklaces don't work.That would be funny.Well,update soon!!
Going good! Keep updating :)
Ooohhhhhh very interesting! Hope you update soon! P.S. I wonder why alot of authors make Ginny so grumpy in the morning? LOL
Author's Response: Because Morning!Ginny is fun to write ;)
OMG! This story is amzin! I love it so far! When is the next chapter gonna be posted? I can hardly wait! The neclace thing is a brilliant idea too! Please countinue soon and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
I like this so far... Where's the rest? lol. I can't wait to read more. :)
It's a good story, I was wondering if you had a beta though as I found a few mistakes in spelling and tense. But I love the necklace idea, very clever! ^^
Author's Response: I do have a beta. Just not really a good one. And I myself are terribly at english. Thank you for reading ^^
i love ur style plz update!!!