This is the worst fanfiction I have ever had the misfortune to actually attempt to read. Not only are you trying to rush to the ending, completely losing JK's character's personalities and mannerisms in the process, but you also use crummy soap opera lines. Honestly, this fanfiction deserves nothing less than being burned and served with 'I Can't Believe It's Not Butter!' Do better next time. -Unsincerely, GW

Author's Response: Holy Crap! That was brutal! I'm sorry you hated the story so much, but I do appreciate the review. If you read the author's notes at the beginning/end of the chapters I did mention that the story was rushed, however, there was alot of plot to cover in only 11 chapters. I am also sorry that you thought that that I butchered the J.K. Rowling's characters, however, this is a fanfic, meaning that we, the fans, are writing the stories, thus, I have the right to twist the character's personalities to suit the plot. As for the 'crummy soap opera lines' if you were a situation like those in Fallen, I am fairly sure that anyone involved would be intensely sincere in their comments. This was my first story, and there are a lot of aspects that I need to improve on, but please remember that this is fiction, meaning scenarios and characters may not be realistic. dracosslytheringal