on Jun 17, 2007 11:53 pm
Oh, that was so cute and I really liked it, and I choose to ignore the last three words: "and he's gone." lol, I like happy endings, but this was really cute.
on Nov 19, 2006 01:50 pm
jenn reviewed Default
on Apr 20, 2005 03:32 am
i agree with everyone else that it's a little short... but i guess that was the point. to keep us guessing. cause really, all we know is that one second she's happy, the next she's sad, and then he's there and then he's gone. and in response to "Dru"... if you were a book editOr, i'd expect you to have better spelling & grammar.
on Oct 11, 2004 07:05 am
That was really good. Thought provoking. And the shortness of it gave it a better affect. I really liked it!! Are you going to write anymore? --Christine
no one reviewed Default
on Oct 08, 2004 02:28 am
it was alright. It could of been longer though, and a little more.....don't know!
Name: Nita G Isenhour
on Oct 02, 2004 04:21 am
Bring him back! Good start. Will there be more?
someone reviewed Default
on Sep 22, 2004 02:29 am
it was nice but i didn't get it
~*~Drusilla~*~ reviewed Default
on Sep 07, 2004 11:22 pm
Very BORING! It could have been a little longer and the plot explained a little more. Sorry for being mean but i am a book editer. I could go on and on, for the wrong things you did.
Author's Response: well then you shouldnt have read it.it was ment to be short.
on Sep 07, 2004 03:13 pm
Love it love it love it! Another story please!