Name: Mollie reviewed
Default on Jun 17, 2007 11:53 pm
Oh, that was so cute and I really liked it, and I choose to ignore the last three words: "and he's gone." lol, I like happy endings, but this was really cute.
Name: ablaze reviewed
Default on Nov 19, 2006 01:50 pm
interesting.
Name: jenn reviewed
Default on Apr 20, 2005 03:32 am
i agree with everyone else that it's a little short... but i guess that was the point. to keep us guessing. cause really, all we know is that one second she's happy, the next she's sad, and then he's there and then he's gone. and in response to "Dru"... if you were a book editOr, i'd expect you to have better spelling & grammar.
Name: Christine reviewed
Default on Oct 11, 2004 07:05 am
That was really good. Thought provoking. And the shortness of it gave it a better affect. I really liked it!! Are you going to write anymore? --Christine
Name: no one reviewed
Default on Oct 08, 2004 02:28 am
it was alright. It could of been longer though, and a little more.....don't know!
Name: Nita G Isenhour reviewed
Default on Oct 02, 2004 04:21 am
Bring him back! Good start. Will there be more?
Name: someone reviewed
Default on Sep 22, 2004 02:29 am
it was nice but i didn't get it
Name: ~*~Drusilla~*~ reviewed
Default on Sep 07, 2004 11:22 pm
Very BORING! It could have been a little longer and the plot explained a little more. Sorry for being mean but i am a book editer. I could go on and on, for the wrong things you did.
~*~Dru~*~
Author's Response: well then you shouldnt have read it.it was ment to be short.
Name: Nakita reviewed
Default on Sep 07, 2004 03:13 pm
Love it love it love it! Another story please!