Wow, I could actually feel the emotion radiate. I must say that this is a simply splendid story! I couldn't write as well as you, but I'm willing to try. You've just captured every moment correctly and it almost makes me jealous on how you do that. I'm glad you've finished your fic. Now, I can take the time to read it. I hope to read some more of your fiction once finished with this one. --sun rised above me--