Name: shaded reviewed Family Trends on Dec 31, 2007 10:36 am

When writing a review for a chapter in this story, I come to realise that within the chapter, almost every chapter, there is a total mood shift. By that, I mean how Draco and Ginny are getting along and everything's going well and then by the end they're at each other's throats, with little chance that either can understand each other's point of view. I don't know how you manage it and make it all seem plausible, but you do. It's fun to read, that's for sure.

I was going to comment on Ginny's devious streak - making Draco believe she's angry at her to hear him confess his feelings for her. The Twins' mischievousness has definitely rubbed off on Ginny.
I like how realistic the argument in this chapter between Draco and Ginny is. The misunderstandings and frustrations due to them are palpable and it's totally understandable how Draco is reluctant to believe Vincent is aiming to destroy the unicorns and also why Ginny believes Draco is being uncomprehendingly stubborn in this regard. 'Tis great, engaging writing.