Name: smprsgrrl reviewed
Chapter Three on Sep 28, 2004 11:37 pm
Hi...
I liked this. I thought this part was well-written and thought out. You did a good job telling the story you wanted to tell. Keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: Hello, and thanks! I appreciate your kind words! :)
Name: Gianfared reviewed
Chapter Two on Sep 25, 2004 12:06 pm
Very interesting start. I'm curious about Ginny's motivation to "befriend" Draco. The writing flows and the dialogue is good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I think Ginny's motivation will come out a lot stronger in Part 2, so it'll be a while! Thanks for your comments!
Name: Dex reviewed
Chapter Two on Sep 24, 2004 09:48 am
Love the story. Hope the next ch. comes out soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 19, 2004 11:44 pm
I'm intrigued... You've certainly gotten off to a good start.
And is this really your first attempt ever? I'm even more impressed.
I like it a lot and I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! This is indeed my first attempt ever, though I've been reading for a long time.
Name: shayniie reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 19, 2004 03:30 pm
Very good start to a fic. I like how you depicted Draco's judgement of Voldemort, how he refused to bow down to someone who had been beaten by a baby. I look forward to the next installments, this is a fic worth watching.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I got Draco's POV across!
Name: Draco Lover reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 19, 2004 05:25 am
Really Good! Can't wait till you add another chapter. I love stories with Draco and the way he deals with being a child of a Death Eater.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Firei reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 19, 2004 03:23 am
Hmmm...not sure what to make of it, but, I like it so far, I think... =D
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I hope the upcoming chapters will solidify the 'like' a little more. :)
Name: Jenny reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 18, 2004 08:01 pm
I really like that Draco is humbly supplicating himself to Voldemort. I'm interested to see what happens now that he's in exile.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Name: Mynuet reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 17, 2004 03:41 pm
I thought it was an excellent depiction of very solid reasons for why Draco would choose not to follow the Death Eater path. Good job, and I hope you write more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, Mynuet! Having a positive review from probably my favourite D/G goddess of all time is fantastic! :)
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 17, 2004 10:01 am
This looks like it's going to be fun. I can't wait to see where you take it! Please update soon - The Lovely Lioness
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Crazed reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 16, 2004 07:27 pm
That was pretty good. I liked how everything went together and how you didn't forget about Peeves. Draco seems a little OOC tho. Too emotional, like, he's showing too much emotion. But it's really good. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Author's Response: crazed, thanks for your nice review. i was afraid draco would seem ooc in this fic, but my rationale for that is that once you've seen someone crucio'd it's probably difficult not to be affected, plus he just found out his dad is a big ol' killing machine. hope that helps!