Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
Civility on Oct 27, 2009 01:29 pm
very nice plot
Name: Biteys reviewed
Civility on Mar 08, 2006 02:43 pm
This is really good. Please write more.
Author's Response: thanks ill have to dig it out and re-write it first
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Civility on Feb 27, 2006 09:35 am
wtf? I liked this fic until the last bit of it. You can't just have calm and quite and then have someone in the lake in the same sentence.
Something like "...giant squid. (enter) Suddenly there was a flash of blue light and Ginny was thrown forward into the lake."
Otherwise I can't wait for your update. This fic has some big potential! ^_^
Author's Response: yeah sorry bout that i wrote this story about 2 yrs ago n when nobody seemed to read it i re-read it n decided it was rubbish n sorta gave up on it but no ppl are sorta showin interested again i mite give it another go
Name: Kisou reviewed
Civility on Feb 17, 2006 09:48 pm
Good, but very short. So...the only solution is...Update. I do think that Ginny does react to Draco lots easier than it seems she would, but we the impression that she hates him really doesn't have as much founding as we'd sometimes like to think it does. Ginny could actually think the Trio is rather stupid about their treatment of him, now that she doesn't worship Potter anymore. She does exhibit quite a bit of resentment with the statement
"Draco, will you please stop calling me 'Weasel'? That's Ron." Keep that resentment. I really like it. It gives you a good twist on Ginny, and that becomes harder and harder to find the more fics I read.
Author's Response: resentment is fun ... lol
Name: DracosLover reviewed
Civility on Oct 03, 2004 06:07 am
wow!! I like it soooo far but write more cause I'm just dying to see what happenes!!!!:)
Author's Response: thank you i'll try to update soon
Name: Adelagia reviewed
Civility on Oct 01, 2004 07:11 pm
This sounds interesting... I thought the dialogue flowed pretty well and would love to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Adelagiai think i'll add another chapter soon, probably in a few day, and it will hopefully get more interesting as it goes on