imelda reviewed Dragon Tears
on Nov 08, 2004 02:37 pm
No!!! This is too awful!! I'm so glad you updated, though. Everything's still a bit confusing, but it is all sort of an okay fog, although I hope it'll be cleared up eventually. Has Ginny regained her memory? Is Tom taking Draco instead of her? Why?
Btw, I really like the D/G relationship you've set up. Keep going!!
imelda reviewed Forgotten
on Nov 01, 2004 08:32 am
I really, really like this story--I like the heavy, sort of unclear way the narration moves, Draco's two different relationships, and the fact that there's so much more to find out. I don't really understand what happened in the scene where Ginny gets knocked out, though, it's a bit too confusing.
I did not expect the twist with Ginny getting amnesia. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Skye reviewed Forgotten
on Oct 27, 2004 10:33 am
I just read the first three chapters and I really like the whole idea of the story. Maybe you could give more background information on how Draco and Ginny first got together. You have a great start and I am really liking the story so far! Update soon please!!
-T- reviewed Fire Flies in the Shadows
on Oct 26, 2004 05:15 pm
I don't get it, but I like it.
Slytherins Wench reviewed Fire Flies in the Shadows
on Oct 25, 2004 07:49 pm
That was a good spot to leave off in Chapter 2. Perhaps in the next chapter you could give us more of a backstory on how they got together, like specific incidents? And more about how Pansy got to be tough. I like the idea of your story and would like to see it fleshed out. :)