Name: Anise reviewed
The road not taken on Dec 01, 2004 06:16 pm
You know, I really like this fic. It's subtle, but it grows on you. The characterizations of Draco and Ginny are extremely good-- lately, it seems very hard to find an actual IC Draco, and you've done a great job. The challenge is always to make him into a person that Ginny could be with, and the way most authors do it is by making him hopelessly OOC. But the only way to do it, really, is to do what you've done here-- to show canon!Draco choosing to take a path that leads him away from complete darkness (where JKR seems determined to send him, btw!) Keep up the good work. :)
Name: shades of Gray reviewed
The road not taken on Dec 01, 2004 06:01 am
Like I have said before- I really like the story.
I like this idea of a pensive- it permits us a glampse into Draco's mind (or atleast how you see it) and more importantly its an effective plot device for Ginny to learn about Draco's past without resorting to Draco directly telling her (which is out of character on draco's part).
I can't wait for the next chapter to see Draco's next lesson
Good Job
Shades
Name: Nakita reviewed
The first cut is the deepest on Nov 06, 2004 05:58 pm
Wow I really enjoyed this! Keep it coming. Hope more is soon!
Name: beckysue2 reviewed
The first cut is the deepest on Nov 04, 2004 04:08 am
Very clever! I never would have thought of the pensieve! I really like this story so I hope you continue quickly.
Great job!
Hugs,
Becky
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
The first cut is the deepest on Nov 04, 2004 12:45 am
I remember reading this fic of yours in your LJ, and I knew then how awesome this one is going to be! I can't wait to find out what happens next! This is certainly one of your more unique works!
Oh yeah... I miss chatting with you so much! I hope you're doing fine! *schnoogles*
Name: Shades of Gray reviewed
The first cut is the deepest on Nov 01, 2004 11:14 am
Well I am really enjoying this story. I like how they are both damaged and will end up relying on each other. I can't wait to see how this story progresses.
Great Job
Name: Mynuet reviewed
The first cut is the deepest on Nov 01, 2004 09:07 am
Oooooh. Nicely dark - I love the way they're both damaged and coming together.
Name: NarutoLovesYou reviewed
The edge of hate on Oct 28, 2004 05:43 pm
This is relaly good.
Please IM me when you update.
GoldLandRover8
is my sn
thanks
I think it'll end up really good!
Keep up the good work
Author's Response: I did try to IM you on Yahoo but no luck. Let me know what system you're on and I'll do so in future.
Name: skully reviewed
The edge of hate on Oct 28, 2004 11:40 am
I know these are supposed to be somewhat short stories, but I'm a stickler for details. I want to know more of why Draco all of the sudden wanted to stop hating. To me it seems only 3/4 of the way explained. I do like the story and you have a great writing style. Keep it up!
Name: Shades of Gray reviewed
The edge of hate on Oct 28, 2004 10:04 am
This story concept is interesting.The first chapter is very well written especially with keeping both Draco and Ginny in character. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Excellent start!
Name: ElvenPrincess reviewed
The edge of hate on Oct 28, 2004 03:00 am
this is a really cool story! please post