Name: Myst reviewed Part Six on Sep 10, 2006 10:40 pm

BTW, how does one add a story to your favorites list? =D

Name: Myst reviewed Part Five on Sep 10, 2006 10:09 pm

Oh thank you. Thank you for making Ginny intelligent enough to realize the true reasons behind Draco's lashing out at her, instead of using it as some lame excuse to foster more tension and fighting between them to make the story falsely dramatic. What a relief! So many stories do that, and it just torques my hide.

I loved Ginny's seduction of him as well, though I half-wished she would have remained on top ;) I'm rather submissive myself, for the most part, but I enjoy seeing women in postions of power, so to speak *smirks lasciviously*

I continue to massively enjoy this story, and am so glad I discovered it. Thank you!

Name: Myst reviewed Part Four on Sep 10, 2006 09:29 pm

This is my favorite chapter so far! I loved the interaction between her and her siblings, and the bittersweet scene between her and Harry was delightfully well done. I would offer more specific critiques, but grammar and such is better done by betas, and as I haven't been requested to do such a thing--and as the story is also complete--I shall refrain from such nitpicking and just hop to the next chapter, which is what I prefer to spend my time doing anyway! =D

Name: Myst reviewed Part Three on Sep 10, 2006 08:02 pm

*claps excitedly* Bravo! I love it. Indulge me as I mention a few specifics and comment:

> "Shit," he whispered softly, "shit,
> shit, shit."

*laughs her arse off* His confusion and consternation here was positively delightful. However, I cannot like how he was rather sugary over her lips meant for kissing, hair meant for twirling, etc. Bleh. Bit too far off too soon. But no matter, the rest was lovely.

"odious" -- Oh I do so love this word! So aristocratic and pompous and yay! *giggles*

Calloused fingers? Hardly. Where on earth would he have gotten them? Certainly not from manual labor, nor Quidditch, wherein he wears protective gloves. Merely being male isn't enough, either. Those born with a silver spoon frequently have quite soft hands, some even going to an extreme of getting a manicure. Quite a few male professionals in the world see a manicurist on a regular basis. I myself go frequently, and my nail ladies have mentioned this to me. I could see Draco having a servant do his nails. No polish, but certainly clipped and filed and smoothed and buffed.

On a purely physical note, I do so love how you write their kisses. Yum! *grins* Yes, I'm very female. Romance novels are not below me (brain candy indeed!), as I enjoy a bit of pure seduction from time to time, and this qualifies nicely. =)

Finally, depreciations? Perhaps deprecations? Either would work, I suppose, however the latter has a better connotation for that context.

*skips off to the next chapter*

Name: Myst reviewed Part One on Sep 10, 2006 06:38 pm

I'm enjoying this immensely so far. The passage of Ginny's fifth year was a bit too quick for my liking--I enjoy details of each year *smirks* However I'm sure it was necessary for the progression of the story.

I like the way you're keeping Draco very canon; I can't stand it when people let him become all saccharin-sweet. He can certainly care, but it's terribly out of character for him to be solicitous in any way without a great amount of background to establish the reasons--i.e., his maturing in some way.

Last note: integrating? Perhaps you were searching for ingratiating. It happens =)

I go to read chapter two with much anticipation!

Name: Ginny Rox the Burrow reviewed Epilogue on Jun 24, 2006 12:06 pm

i loved it!!!!!i really cudnt stop reading it!!!!the only thing i think i cud comment on is that Ginny's birthday is August 11th so she wud either hav been 18 or cummin up in less than 2 weeks since it is at least August at this time ryt??that's all.lol.neway,i luved luved luved it!!!!*GRtB*

Name: Ginny Rox the Burrow reviewed Part Two on Jun 22, 2006 10:54 pm

i loved loved loved the kiss at the end.iv read the paragraph abowt 5 times now and i'll probably do it again now.awsum!!!!seriously,really good description and just enuf hesitation if that makes sense.lol.*GRtB*

Name: Starsweeper reviewed Epilogue on Apr 07, 2006 02:53 am

This was a very cute story!! I'm so happy it had a happy ending and I loved that you stayed true to Draco...even though he changed a little for Ginny he didn't change into a Harry Copy. Which would have stunk because Draco is our ultimate bad boy turned good for the girl he loves...sigh. Anyways, loved the story ^_^

Name: nArIan reviewed Epilogue on Mar 02, 2006 05:42 am

Absolutely outstanding story! I've loved it from beginning to end! I wish you would write a sequel but ah well! I'm going to read The Past Didnt Go Nowhere now! I've heard is a great story and if it turns out to be as great as this one, then I'm off to have a good time! Thankyou for writting this story and if you ever get bored and have nothing else to do i have a great idea...SEQUEL!
Keep up the great work!

Name: Nectaris reviewed Epilogue on Feb 19, 2006 02:35 pm

I LOVED this story I could go into absolute gushing praise and girlishness about how great it was, *takes deep breath* but I won't.

Name: flame_kitty reviewed Epilogue on Feb 04, 2006 05:18 am

Please Please Please write a sequel!!!!
It doesn't have to be a Hogwarts Era thingie!! You can just mention Draco's job every now and again!!
Focus more on Ginny as an auror!
Please Please Please Please!!! I would love you forever!!!
::pouts::
Well, I tried.
As for now, I'm going off to read the rest of this series. ^_^

Name: Shelley reviewed Part One on Jan 26, 2006 04:33 pm

Wow! I have never reviewed before and I have read a lot of fanfiction. The characters and the story are believeable and the english is equisite. Thankyou

Name: Savannah reviewed Part Six on Jan 04, 2006 12:09 pm

I like this.... But you seem to have so much freetime... i mean writing this story all day long seems what your doing. I don't picture ginny with the loser named malfoy ( or that is how he is in my book) but it's the most wonderful time of the year.... sorry i ment it's the most wonderful STORY of the year.