Name: Tryphe reviewed
We All Fall Down on Jan 09, 2005 11:52 am
This story is amazing! Please e-mail me at xtryphex@yahoo.com when you post the next chapter.
Name: Funnykido reviewed
The Powers of Toads on Jan 08, 2005 02:10 pm
I love your writing style, and I love the story, and I'm holding a (probably hopeless) hope out that somehow everything will be all right in the end, but this story is making me outrageously mad at the moment.
Name: yellowpages20 reviewed
The Powers of Toads on Jan 08, 2005 02:01 pm
I still don't see why Ginny had to go to the dark side, (that sounds like Star Wars) but this story is very original, which is good, not cliched at all. Good job!
Name: Rea Yume reviewed
A Dangerous Game on Jan 08, 2005 12:38 pm
Ahahaha I loved Ginny's cornering of him outside the Hall. Funny!!
Name: Rea Yume reviewed
Facades on Jan 08, 2005 12:26 pm
Wow, nice start =) I'm very curious as to why Draco is crying, so I'm going to have to keep this short. Loving it though.
Name: LadyEndymion reviewed
We All Fall Down on Dec 26, 2004 11:20 am
Oh, and I just wanted to add, that I love the fact that you made Ginny turn to Draco's side, or the Dark Side. I knew that she always had it in her - you can't be possessed by Voldemort and have no lasting side effects. It was entirely plausible, dramatic and wonderful twist. I love dark D/G stories. Bellatrix's speech was amazing - good rationalization. Ginny's uncertainty and Draco's behavior was right on target. And just to say again, Bravo!
Name: LadyEndymion reviewed
We All Fall Down on Dec 26, 2004 11:17 am
I think that I'm rendered breathless by that last chapter. You have an amazing ability for characterization and to capture the psyche of your characters. I love your Draco and Ginny - but they still remain Rowling's Draco and Ginny as well. Terrific, amazing. I'm absolutely hooked on this story. I check everyday for updates. Bravo!
Name: imelda reviewed
We All Fall Down on Dec 25, 2004 06:02 pm
Hm. I am NOT happy with that chapter's ending, but I guess it was pretty clear where this fic was going long before. I will say, however, that Bellatrix's argument was quite good (if only killing weren't her solution). Also, I wish Draco weren't so dumb. His character I love, but his "I thought you were strong" was cruel and stupid. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Name: Dead reviewed
We All Fall Down on Dec 25, 2004 12:24 am
Wow. Bellatrix's speech on what she's fighting for is probably the best one I have ever read in a fic. It was just like, whoa, total sense. I for one, would ditch the 'good' side and go for the 'bad'. Haha, much like Ginny did. The interactions between Draco and Ginny keep getting better and better. I'm loving the story so far, keep the updates coming!
Name: Funnykido reviewed
We All Fall Down on Dec 24, 2004 10:21 am
Aah! I want to go around my house screaming! So Ginny abandons the order and goes for the dark, huh? I don't know. . this chap made me so confused. . I can see the reasoning for the death eaters (which was REALLY good I have to say, it's awesome, marvelous that you put that in there), but then again I'm pulled by the "light" side, you know? This . . . too good for words, seriously, i should make up a new word to say how good this chap was. Stupendous! Ok that works for now, even though I didn't make it up. But great work, I can't wait for the next chap, even though it makes me sad! Happy Holidays!
Name: yellowpages20 reviewed
We All Fall Down on Dec 24, 2004 10:06 am
This story makes me sad, : (, but in a good way! Hope you update soon, it's an awesome story! Merry Chritsmas/Hanakkuh/Kwanza, whichever you celebrate!
Name: tharasi reviewed
Chrysalis on Dec 22, 2004 10:10 am
GAH!
(i think that about sums it up. i mean... this is so dark and scary, and i never thought that i would ever sympathize with draco more than ginny, and bellatrix is the perfect manipulator.... and GAH! what is going to happen? ^-^ update soon, i love it!)
Author's Response: Hee, hee! I never knew you could respond to reviews; this is exciting! Anyway, you all rock SO much and I thank you all for your support. It means a lot! I'm trying to update ASAP, but it seems I had some technical errors in Chapter 6 and I'm going to resubmit as soon as I find someone to help me eliminate them. Just thought I'd let you guys know! Love from,
Scarlett
Name: LadyEndymion reviewed
Chrysalis on Dec 21, 2004 10:16 am
I've just caught up to this story and I must say that this latest chapter is by far my favorite. Great characterization and careful attention to the psychological issues. and Bellatrix. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Elise
Name: imelda reviewed
Chrysalis on Dec 20, 2004 12:17 pm
Holy CRAP. You're INSANE. This is the best thing just about EVER. I am so scared, right now, of what's going on in Ginny's mind, of Draco setting out to convert Ginny, of what Bellatrix was doing IN Hogwarts and what she did when Ginny fainted...ack. It's absolutely bloody insane. And so good. Ginny's explosion at the Trio...she's so confused, and she's so confusing. What does she want, after all? And I feel exactly the same way she does about the Chamber incident--you put it perfectly, it was just an old adventure to the Trio. But not for Ginny. My goodness, though, this fic is exciting. And terrifying. I'm already dying for more, and I just finished it about a second ago.
Name: imelda reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 20, 2004 11:52 am
Ohmigoodness what a chapter. The kiss was amazing, better than I had even hoped, and their performance for Seamus and Lavender was even greater.
Ginny's indecisive mental arguing is wonderfully done, and makes total sense, and now...the plot gets thicker. Oh, dear. I'm a little scared to continue, to tell you the truth, but I must. I feel so sorry for Draco, that his new guardian is Bellatrix. But I love that our fave couple is actually starting to fall for each other. Yikers. Draco wasn't kidding when he told Ginny she was playing a dangerous game.
Oh! Oh! And speaking of! The line Ginny says about 'never want to be good again' was sooo cool. I mean, sure it was cheesy, but it's so similar to something I've heard in real life I can't criticize it. It was excellent, and sent a thrill down my spine!! More!!
Name: imelda reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 20, 2004 11:30 am
Yes!!! I haven't even finished the chapter yet, but I wanted to point out just how damned cool it is that you had Draco echo Harry's words: "she... stood up for him? she stood up...for him?" Or whatever. I love it!! teehee too funny
Name: imelda reviewed
A Dangerous Game on Dec 20, 2004 11:27 am
Whoa. Who-oa. What an excellent ending to the chapter. This fic just gets better and better.
I love that you did have Ginny tell Draco the truth about how she felt towards Narcissa's death. I think it was entirely appropriate. Cannot wait to see what happens next! Eeee! Kiss!!!
Name: imelda reviewed
Fight and Flight on Dec 20, 2004 11:26 am
Your Ginny is the greatest. I'm glad she tried to comfort Malfoy...although maybe she should have been honest about telling him that Narcissa being dead WAS just one less DE to kill...but aside from her sweetness, I her tenacity is great, too. She totally laid the smack down on Draco in the dormitory. Go Ginny!
Name: imelda reviewed
Facades on Dec 20, 2004 11:24 am
What a shocking beginning! The last thing I expected was to see Malfoy cry. The rest of the chapter was really good, too--I loved that line about the innocent black book, and then the sinister adjectives you used to describe it. I think the sort of duality of how it might appear to different people who know different things was fascinating. Great line.
Name: Ginerva reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 07, 2004 06:55 pm
Oh i love it!!!! It's awesomely written! Great job and i can't wait to see more. Please update soon for my sanity i can't live without my Draco and Ginny stories!!!!
Name: yellowpages20 reviewed
Chrysalis on Dec 07, 2004 04:19 pm
Really good story! I think I've found a good D/G Writer!
Name: sokkerox05 reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 07, 2004 04:18 pm
Again, really good chapter! I really like your style of writing! I can't wait to see what happens! Really good plot, too!
Name: rembrandt reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 05, 2004 10:48 am
Lovely! Love the lovely kisses...
Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Name: missparker reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 05, 2004 08:52 am
SQEAK!!!omg how lovely at the end!
Name: sokkerox05 reviewed
Swift as Shadow, Black as Night on Dec 04, 2004 04:35 pm
Hey, I just started reading it, It's really good! Do you have any of this chapter posted anywhere else?