Name: search4inspiration reviewed
New Alliances on Jul 02, 2007 02:02 pm
What a gem! I like the depth of characters and plot that you are building. This story is so unique, and the timing/pacing is just perfect. The poker scene, especially, was intruiging. Very well-written... I wish you would continue it! :)
Name: sweetproserpina reviewed
New Alliances on Apr 16, 2007 07:11 pm
This one's been on hiatus for awhile now - I find I'm quite stuck on it. No updates for awhile til I work it out. Thanks for reading and reviewing, any ideas welcome!
Name: ser reviewed
New Alliances on Dec 07, 2004 03:12 am
What a great story. Absolutely brilliant.
All of the characters are in character and I'm curious about Nott. i can see you're going to have developing his character.
I was just wondering about the football though. Do you mean an American football so the egg shaped one (I think its egg shaped!) or the one used in British football? Just because I'm fussy!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Love ser
Name: ser reviewed
New Alliances on Dec 07, 2004 03:10 am
This is fantasic.
He's completely in character here which makes the story all that much better.
A great story line here as well. However I was wondefing if you were talking about a football used in British football or ones used in American? Just because I'm fussy like that!
Anyway great and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Love ser
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
New Alliances on Dec 06, 2004 03:37 pm
Great start! I like how you set up the friendship with Nott and you've given us a good insight into Draco's character. Now I look forward to interaction with Ginny. :)
Name: Deirdre O'Kelly reviewed
New Alliances on Dec 06, 2004 03:21 pm
Now you can't just leave us hanging like that... Update! And quickly!