Name: BROKEN DREAMS reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 08, 2005 06:20 am
Aww this was really good. I hope the next chapter is up soon, well done!
Name: eva reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 07, 2005 07:01 pm
wow! i love your story and this by far has got to be your best chapter. please continue! i can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thank you so much........I truly fear that each chapter is an imporvement upon the one before it. I have worried that I would drop the ball the further into the story I get. I've never written this many chapters and it's good to hear that it was an improvement.
TTFN
Kelly
Name: MistysDawn reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 07, 2005 04:36 pm
A lot of people may think Percy's OOC in this, but I could totally see him flipping like that. Awesome idea.
Author's Response: I wasn't too concerned with IC or OOC......I think that I might fail miserably if I tried. I just try to write them the way I picture them in this particular senerio and hope that I do it in a way that people will enjoy.
I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story........people actually liking what I'm writing still absolutely floors me.....so thanks!!!!!
TTFN
Kelly
Name: Draco Luva reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 07, 2005 01:34 pm
I wonder if Draco will ever find out Ginny's pregnant...watch, lol, the last chapter will be like chapter 20 when she finally gets to tell him.
Author's Response: When this story began it was going to be very similar to 'Hands'......three chapters but as I got into setting it up it just took off running and all I could do is hold on to the reins (yes, I have horses).
So even though originally he would have found out in chapter 3 it was pushed back a couple of times.......I do promise it will not be in twenty chapters........though the story will not end with telling him......that kind of got out of hand also.
All I can say is hopefully it will be soon, but not to soon *grin*.
TTFN
Kelly
Name: annonomis reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 07, 2005 12:34 pm
OMg, how could u Leave it ending like that! please put the next chapter up VERY soon. it was really good
Name: sillyrabbittrixareforkids reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 06, 2005 07:38 pm
more more more! please update soon! I loveeee this story!
Author's Response: Love the screen name!!!!
I will update as quickly as RL allows but it is my obsession right now........I detest when stories I like are not completed......That will not happen.
Thanks, I'm glad you like!!!!!
TTFN
Kelly
Name: Sunia reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 31, 2004 01:10 pm
awww.... *eagerly awaits more*
Author's Response: Thank you.......updates as quickly as RL allows.
TTFN
Kelly
Name: meomy reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 31, 2004 09:59 am
awww .. keep writting ... this is very good .. plz update soon
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
TTFN
Kelly
Name: emvee reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 31, 2004 06:00 am
nice plot line. i'm hoping for more dialog in later chapters. keep going looking forward to the update.
Author's Response: Dialog terrifies me since I think I suck at it......but I do have a very stubborn person pushing me out of my comforts zones with annoying frequency.
I do descriptive best but I am working hard to increase the dialog and have a mixture of the two.
Keep tabs on me and let me know how you think I've done......OK?
TTFN
Kelly
Name: swimchick1614 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Dec 31, 2004 05:33 am
Nicely written...although you could have made what draco was telling ginny a little clearer, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you.....I'm glad you like.
I'm not sure what was unclear if you have any questions feel free to email me and I'll answer what I can.
Thanks for the review.....they make my day and inspire and motivate me.
TTFN
Kelly
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 31, 2004 04:13 am
I'm liking this story more and more. And now that you've thickened the plot, I'm dying here. I want desperately to know who has been undermining Draco's business!! You're good with that cliffie! I don't think it'll be the fun evening in the Malfoy household that Gin imagined when she learns of Draco's news. It'll offset her good news *sigh* Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Getting a review from you just made my day as I totally love your work.......*walking on clouds*
Name: Nikita reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2004 03:11 pm
This is really good...update asap
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!
TTFN
Kelly
Name: Sunia reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 23, 2004 01:21 pm
awwww, that was really sweet. Please write more soon :)
~Sunia
Author's Response: Thank you
TTFN
Kelly
Name: rembrandt reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 20, 2004 11:14 pm
oh that was lovely! next chapter please!
Author's Response: Thank you
TTFN
Kelly
Name: Annoynomis reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 18, 2004 06:21 am
Omg, that was really, please right more