Name: MontglaneChess reviewed
Aftermath on Sep 11, 2005 07:04 am
Absolutely beautiful. A stunning combination of Laurell K. Hamilton's seductive ruthlessness and the mysticism of Great Britian. If only more people were this talented...a joining of the ranks of master characterization.
Name: abby reviewed
Aftermath on Jul 11, 2005 03:26 pm
wow this was an amazing story! u have to write a sequel...i would like to see malfoy trying to adjust to his new "common" folks life...
Name: abby reviewed
The Surrender on Jul 11, 2005 12:01 pm
nooooooo u cant take him away from ginny!!!!!! they were just getting along! real well i might add....=)
Name: abby reviewed
Choosing and Claiming on Jul 11, 2005 11:41 am
umm ive bin noticing it for quite some time now ..... why do ginny and malfoy keep saying lady? is that like equivalent to omg or something?
Name: abby reviewed
Introducing the High Clan on Jul 10, 2005 06:12 pm
eewww SEX?! i thought this story was not naughty!
Name: abby reviewed
Recriminations on Jul 10, 2005 05:59 pm
ooh i get it now.....
Name: abby reviewed
Introducing the Game on Jul 10, 2005 05:55 pm
OMG wut is he doing at her house all of a sudden? well...hmm...i suppose it was for him to explain all that stuff to her...otherwise great story so far!
Name: abby reviewed
Sowing Speculation on Jul 10, 2005 05:47 pm
hmm...very interesting....but it seems that malfoy and ginny are getting friendly for no reason...wait wait i mean like the rumour was spread too fast and malfoy cant really like her so fast.....and why is he doing all that stuff for her? sjfklsj... i dunnoo....something like that....there doesnt seem to be a good enought reason/rumour for them to start associating.
Name: Lyndsie Fenele reviewed
Unravelling and Rebuilding on Jun 28, 2005 02:58 pm
So I'm a little speechless right now. The last two chapters of this story have kept me completely spellbound as I read them. The pace at first was a bit slow for how my tastes normally run, but I thought it matched well the subtle cunning of the actions of the Clans... then the first shock for me came in the previous chapter with the revelation of Katherine's twin sister Lily... only to be followed by the culmination of the action which is not unlike the ley lines being drawn together in final resolution. Absolute perfection. I'd write more but I'm dying to get to the next chapter. One of the best plots in fanfiction that I have ever read.
Name: AvidAuror reviewed
Aftermath on Mar 26, 2005 08:53 pm
This story was well written and an immense pleasure to read. You captured me with your excellent pace and style of writing. Draco was partcularly complex and the fact that we read soo little of himin the HP books makes this a pleasure. He maintained JKR's charaterisation while being a lotmore developed and deep. I loved the way you dealt with the social differences and attacked the nessecity of aristocracy in society[whether the Wizarding Society or ours], even if the idea did come another source....I hope you write a sequel - I would love to see how Draco will integrate the High Clans into the "common" wizarding society.
Great Piece
Name: belluesque@yahoo.com reviewed
Aftermath on Jan 20, 2005 11:26 am
This fanfic was well, amazing. The intrinsic truth of all the social interrelationships in this fic was all very, very true. Good job.
Name: Rie reviewed
Introductions on Jan 20, 2005 05:24 am
expected but mad in a way...the way Draco had taken control of the Clans with those manipulating strategies...i can only assumed the he's twisted...too bad there weren't many Ginny's appeareances here...this story has strong references thus also a very strong hold on its plots...love the references btw...especially Mist of Avalon :) keep up the good work...it's always been a great pleasure reading great stories such as yours...(^_^)
Name: Natasha reviewed
Aftermath on Dec 29, 2004 04:37 pm
Hello,
I had just started reading your story today when I immediately fell immersed in it. You are an amazing writer and you should really consider, if you have not already, in becoming a writer/author. This is an amazing piece of fan fiction. I really want you to continue with this story. Write a sequel about their lives after the Clan’s came together. If you don’t, I understand, it is already an amazing story and though you don’t need to continue I would love if you did.
Name: jackie reviewed
Aftermath on Dec 26, 2004 07:31 pm
loved it, i read it straight through, i couldnt get enough! sequal maybe?
Name: tkmoore reviewed
Aftermath on Dec 26, 2004 06:28 am
I started this story last night and I hated having to stop to get some sleep. I picked it up this morning and couldn't stop until I finished.
All I can say is........WOW........such a wonderful story. With all the legend, lore and mistisim it was such a great read. There were touches of Mists of Avalon, Arthur, and myths.
I loved your characterization of Draco and the other High Clan Lords even Snape. And Luc as an OC was a wonderfully complex character a lovable rapscallion in a way.
At first I was worried about your characterization of Ginny but in the end you pulled her thru and let her strengths shine. Her ability to handle her mother and brother was refreshing. And I loved how Arthur was portrayed in a favorable light, it seems he is so often reduced to a lovable fool. It was nice to see that despite what people choose to see he had great strength of character.
A wonderful job............well done.........I truly enjoyed every moment of this story.
Thanks for sharing with us!!!!!
TTFN
Kelly
Name: Merry reviewed
Aftermath on Dec 25, 2004 11:09 am
It was such a GREAT story !!!! Couldn't stop reading it till I finished it. Your plot was really interesting and cunning ! Loved your Draco and Ginny !!!!
Name: Talie reviewed
Aftermath on Dec 24, 2004 11:13 pm
this has to be one of my top 5 favorite D/G fics. i got so caught up in the plot and the trial and the Clan Lords adn jsut everythin! i even found myself trying to do the same unreadable mask and eye tricks lol as they did >.< . I absolutely love this story and your style of writing, i've recommended this story to all of my friends, even the the ones who don't read HP fanfics.
once again, MAG-NI-FICO!!!! :)
Name: londoun reviewed
The Trial pt 1: Reality Construct on Dec 24, 2004 05:56 pm
i just wanted to point out one "virginia" that you missed when changing her name. it's in the third paragraph from the end. other than that, i love the story. you've done an excellent job building an interesting plot. so, now i'm off to read the rest!
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed
Aftermath on Dec 24, 2004 04:18 am
I'm so glad you've posted this here!! It'd been a while since I read this story and once I started, I couldn't stop. I read it straight through. You definitely have a gift for writing and a gift for wonderful D/G storylines! It's brilliant and intriguing and wonderful all together! Welcome to FIA!
Name: lina reviewed
Choosing and Claiming on Dec 23, 2004 04:38 pm
i haven't heard from you in awhile in terms of fics. i'm so glad you're posting again! your plots are always so thorough and intricate, it always makes for a great read.