Name: myran reviewed
Aftermath on Aug 29, 2006 09:45 pm
Exceptional. Your characters were well developed and captivating- and you balanced the dark with the light very well, a hard feat for any author to accomplish. As much as I loved reading your fanfiction- you should be writing your own fiction. Kudos for such a worthy feat.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Introducing the Game on Jul 27, 2006 06:47 am
~Ok, I get it. Great Chapter.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Sowing Speculation on Jul 27, 2006 06:38 am
~I dont understand what is going on.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Public Viewing on Jul 27, 2006 06:00 am
~I like the sounds of that. HeHeHeHeHeHeHe!!~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Matchmaking on Jul 27, 2006 05:51 am
~Great Chapter. I love it.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Diagon Alley on Jul 27, 2006 05:28 am
~I love this chapter. So glad i stuck with it.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Introductions on Jul 27, 2006 05:20 am
~WOW. I really like this story. It seems kinda dark and i really dont enjoy that, but i am willing to read on because you have a wonderful writing style.~
Name: LilyEvans reviewed
Diagon Alley on Jul 20, 2006 03:52 pm
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Name: LilyEvans reviewed
Diagon Alley on Jul 20, 2006 03:50 pm
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Name: Zakia reviewed
Aftermath on Jun 24, 2006 09:42 am
This story was very captivating. It held so much suspense that you could not stop reading. Although this story was unusual to the original Harry Potter series, it held some good points and references to the stories. This is a story I may never forget and will always praise.
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't intend to make the plot so spectacular, in the beginning, but I think the story ran away from me...
Name: Tai reviewed
Aftermath on May 26, 2006 05:56 pm
Your story was too magnificent for words! But I will try. I haven't read your previous story and though for a while I felt that I would be completely clueless reading further chapters alleviated me of that fear. Your story was flawlessy written: in diction, grammar, and in the emotion you gave for and from the characters.
I was so upset it ended but I did like how you ended it :-D
Maybe you will write another one *hopeful look*
Either way I know I will coming back to read this story again for the sheer and wonderful pleasure of it.
Name: Tai reviewed
Aftermath on May 26, 2006 05:55 pm
Your story was too magnificent for words! But I will try. I haven't read your previous story and though for a while I felt that I would be completely clueless reading further chapters alleviated me of that fear. Your story was flawlessy written: in diction, grammar, and in the emotion you gave for and from the characters.
I was so upset it ended but I did like how you ended it :-D
Maybe you will write another one *hopeful look*
Either way I know I will coming back to read this story again for the sheer and wonderful pleasure of it.
Name: gale reviewed
Sowing Speculation on May 19, 2006 04:28 pm
"n'est ce pas" I actually think that its n'est pas. No "ce".
Name: Christine reviewed
Aftermath on May 18, 2006 04:32 am
I just finished reading this fic, and I must say that it was fabulous!! I absolutely loved all your references to the different books. Your writing is unique and great. Loved the story.
Christine
Name: saucy reviewed
The Real World on May 07, 2006 03:39 pm
There is a Virginia in the first paragraph of the second section in this chapter. Just thought you'd like to know so you can change it to Ginevra.
Name: saucy reviewed
The Real World on May 07, 2006 03:39 pm
There is a Virginia in the first paragraph of the second section in this chapter. Just thought you'd like to know so you can change it to Ginevra.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Sowing Speculation on Apr 29, 2006 05:01 am
A catalyst? Hmm,... what could it be the catalyst be?
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Public Viewing on Apr 28, 2006 01:45 pm
Ooh! Racy! This was an amazing chapter(just as the rest of this story has been so far!).
I love it!
Name: Anya reviewed
Aftermath on Apr 28, 2006 06:50 am
what can I say? Just as Embellished said: "When Mynuet featured this story, I took it as a sign that it was time for me to reread it (not for the first time!). Then I realized that I have probably never reviewed it, so here I am making amends. :)"
This story touched me as it did the first time, and I read it in one breath, even letting my worldly obligations aside. Superb!
Author's Response: (*Finally* figured out how to respond to reviews...)
Thanks for rereading and still admiring!
Name: Pajama Pants reviewed
Aftermath on Apr 27, 2006 06:42 pm
This was a superb story. Your author notes alone reveal the amount of care, crafting, and planning that went into its development. Thanks for sharing your most excellent efforts.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Introductions on Apr 26, 2006 04:49 am
I really liked that last paragraph.
You might want to put a warning in that this does not include HBP. You said you wrote it two years ago with should be enough, but an added note would be appriciated.
Author's Response: This response may be a little late (ok, very) but I thought I should answer. I wrote Unforgiven in early '03, before OotP came out. Back then it wasn't *too* AU, only speculative. I suppose I should put a warning in, for unsuspecting readers.
And if you haven't already figured it out, Luc is one of my OCs from another story...
Name: Kisou reviewed
Introductions on Apr 26, 2006 04:44 am
You said his uncle 'Luc'? Who in the world is that? Lucius is his father, and I don't know of another 'Luc' name.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Aftermath on Apr 26, 2006 04:27 am
When Mynuet featured this story, I took it as a sign that it was time for me to reread it (not for the first time!). Then I realized that I have probably never reviewed it, so here I am making amends. :)
This is one of my all time favorite D/G fics. You do such a nice job of balancing the romance with the High Clan drama. You are a master at weaving a tale, giving it depth, and making it come alive. And I love the strength and power you give Draco.
Anyway, I just wanted to register my awe because I never have done so before, at least not about this story. I am, as always, looking forward to reading more from you. But maybe I will have to go back and reread some of your other stories while I wait!
Author's Response: I realise this response is a few months late, but I finally figured out how it works. As much as I appreciate first time reviewers, I love the ones who reread and tell me that they're still appreciative the second time round...
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Introductions on Apr 25, 2006 03:04 pm
I love this chapter, it leaves so much to be discovered! I can't wait to keep reading!
Name: 40+fan reviewed
Aftermath on Nov 19, 2005 01:25 pm
All I can say is WOW!!!! GREAT!!!! one of the best stories I have ever stumbled on. I stayed up all night to finish it. PLEASE>>PLEASE>>PLEASE wright more.