Name: newfanficlover reviewed From Bad to Worse on Jul 25, 2010 07:30 am

For this chapter the only thing i would say is you spent allot of time saying how much she wanted to be apart of the meeting and know what is going on. In my opinion just get it down effectively then keep the story moving.

Name: patricia reviewed Futile Attempts at Civility on Apr 08, 2006 01:05 pm

its a really good start i cant wait for what's going to happen next.

Name: KLime reviewed Futile Attempts at Civility on Jan 19, 2005 11:49 pm

little review cause not much time, to say that so far I like what you do, so if you could continue, I'd be happy!!

Name: CuteElf14 reviewed Futile Attempts at Civility on Jan 16, 2005 06:19 pm

MORE! it's very good!

Name: smokeline reviewed Confrontations on Jan 07, 2005 12:29 pm

*waves from LJ* Very nice story so far. I actually like how they're fighting; it adds to the tension between them. And yay for a story where Draco's magically converted to the side of the light (I'm allowed to criticize them; I wrote one myself a while back). And it seems that Ginny's carrying a little hate of her own...ah, the fun that is love/hate relationships.

Name: Chucky reviewed Confrontations on Jan 02, 2005 02:08 pm

I think I already reviewed your story somewhere else (don't remember where), but so what, I'll just do it again. It's a great story so far, can't wait for more.

Name: SomethingsWicked reviewed Confrontations on Dec 31, 2004 07:49 pm

Love it! The fighting was excellent and not forced at all. :) You're definately a natural at writing. You're very good. ;) Adding to my favorites. :D Update soon!

Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Confrontations on Dec 30, 2004 09:40 pm

squeee! this was quite a good setting-the-stage chapter; you've characterized both Draco and Ginny very well -- good luck w/ the rest of the story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying very hard to keep Draco and Ginny in character. :)

Name: Tiffany&Co reviewed Confrontations on Dec 30, 2004 07:56 am

Hehe, I can never get enough of those two fighting. It's always so much more interesting than, say, Draco and the Trio, in which case their conversation is as follows: "Death Eater!" "Scarhead!" "Death eater!" "Dirt poor Weasel!" "Death eater!" "Mudblood!" "ARRRGGGH!" And then they jump on each other... yeah, so anyway, that's why I liked your little bit of argument, there. To tell you the truth, though, it wasn't a very substantial chapter. Nothing got accomplished besides yelling, especially not if Draco won't even consider what anyone said. It's a good point, by the way, that his beliefs are too deeply ingrained to be reconsidered, even when someone gives him a very logical argument against them. Chapter seemed a little pointless, but funny and well-written. Draco doesn't seem to be doing much so far besides looking cold and angry, but the bit about his beliefs are really, really nice, and good job setting up the tension as far as why he's there and the relationship between him, his father, and Death Eaters.

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, Draco and Ginny had loads of fun biting each others' heads off. I know this chapter was mostly arguing, but like Red mentions in her review, it was kind of a transition chapter. I had to just let them at it, and in the process I think they actually did say some rather substantial things and put a lot of information out on the table, especially when it comes to their beliefs. Thanks for the nice, long review...and constructive criticism is always welcome!

Name: Jenna reviewed From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 03:59 pm

that was awesome. I am really starting to like this. I would have never have thought that Malfoy would be in the headquarters like that! keep me updated with this story. my e-mail is hazel_angel_04@hotmail.com. thanks and happy New Year! Jenna

Author's Response: Thank you! There's much more in store, just wait! Yes, Malfoy in the Order's HQ. It has all kinds of possibilities... Happy New Year to you, too!

Name: Tiffany&Co reviewed From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 10:08 am

Really good job, I especially like Ginny's character, completely the opposite of bland. I enjoyed her temper tantrum, which was interesting and kind of funny (considering she was complaining about being treated like a little kid) but seemed a pretty logical (if not practical) reaction. Draco Malfoy seems pretty interesting too. I'd say I'd be your beta, but I haven't been one before, and I'm not sure I'm very good at Britpicking, considering that I'm not British...^-~

Author's Response: Thanks! I've tried very hard to make Ginny's character entirely un-bland...she's no shy little girl, that's for sure. I enjoyed writing her temper tantrum, which yeah, was kind of ironic, but I think it was pretty justified under the circumstances. And Draco...of course he's interesting, he's always interesting!

Name: Christine reviewed From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 03:40 am

This is good, I would offer to be like a beta or whatever, but not so good when it comes to writing I'm afraid. I wouldn't be very good at it, I can only spell, and that's what dictionary's are for. Anyway, Please update again soon!! Christine

Author's Response: Thanks! It's alright about betaing...got one now! :) I AM a terrible speller, though...lol. My trusty spell check has gotten me out of many a jam. I've updated already, which is quite soon, I think...hope you like chapter 2!

Name: Mynuet reviewed From Bad to Worse on Dec 28, 2004 06:37 pm

Fabulous start! I really look forward to seeing more. Ginny's impotent rage and instant recognition of the similarity between her position and Draco's were excellently done. It seems like you could end up with either teen convincing the other to switch sides, or to say forget it and just take off - and that I can't predict which way you're going to go just makes me all the more eager.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like this so far! I had quite a bit of fun writing Ginny's little tantrum...I thought it did turn out pretty well. :)