Name: ShadowRess reviewed Confrontations on Jan 16, 2005 04:37 pm
Very nice. Is Snape actually....fond of Ginny? That's awesome. It would be even more awesome if she got into an advanced potions class. I always see her as being rather talented in potions, although I've no idea why.
Name: smokeline reviewed Confrontations on Jan 07, 2005 12:29 pm
*waves from LJ* Very nice story so far. I actually like how they're fighting; it adds to the tension between them. And yay for a story where Draco's magically converted to the side of the light (I'm allowed to criticize them; I wrote one myself a while back). And it seems that Ginny's carrying a little hate of her own...ah, the fun that is love/hate relationships.
Name: Andrastre reviewed Confrontations on Jan 07, 2005 06:54 am
Hey, I really love this! I enjoy arguments, and the insults they're throwing are really well thought out. I especially like when he grabs the front of her shirt- like there's already physical contact between them, even though they're arguing. And the double entendre when he says he doesn't respect her is great, although maybe just a figment of my imagination? Anyway, please update soon!
Name: Chucky reviewed Confrontations on Jan 02, 2005 02:08 pm
I think I already reviewed your story somewhere else (don't remember where), but so what, I'll just do it again. It's a great story so far, can't wait for more.
Name: starryn1ght reviewed Confrontations on Jan 01, 2005 05:08 pm
This is excellent! I love it. You do a wonderful job of portraying both Draco and Ginny. Nicely written. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Name: SomethingsWicked reviewed Confrontations on Dec 31, 2004 07:49 pm
Love it! The fighting was excellent and not forced at all. :) You're definately a natural at writing. You're very good. ;) Adding to my favorites. :D Update soon!
Name: CuteElf14 reviewed Confrontations on Dec 31, 2004 07:15 am
MORE!!

Author's Response: I'm working on that... :)
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Confrontations on Dec 30, 2004 09:40 pm
squeee! this was quite a good setting-the-stage chapter; you've characterized both Draco and Ginny very well -- good luck w/ the rest of the story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying very hard to keep Draco and Ginny in character. :)
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed Confrontations on Dec 30, 2004 09:20 am
Hey - I was just reading Tiff's review and I had to respond. Personally that wasn't a pointless chapter, because while nothing truly vital to the plot line occured, it got Draco and Ginny talking (well, arguing, anyways) and mapped out their views of each other; now we know what the two are going to be up against to come to terms with each other. It also left Draco food for thought; a nice chunk of Ginny to chew on. So I view it as a transition chapter. Now we've got the ball rolling, all we have to do is wait for our lovely author to update! :) -Red (Tiffany&Co - No offense meant at all - Just wanted to say that I didn't think it was a pointless chapter, but it seems a little bit. . .stronger? than i'd meant it to. Sorry I was so vehement it saying my piece).

Author's Response: Thanks for the back-up...that's exactly what I had in mind for the purpose of this chapter to be! I don't think you came across as too offensive, personally. :) And again: I can't thank you enough for being my beta!
Name: Tiffany&Co reviewed Confrontations on Dec 30, 2004 07:56 am
Hehe, I can never get enough of those two fighting. It's always so much more interesting than, say, Draco and the Trio, in which case their conversation is as follows: "Death Eater!" "Scarhead!" "Death eater!" "Dirt poor Weasel!" "Death eater!" "Mudblood!" "ARRRGGGH!" And then they jump on each other... yeah, so anyway, that's why I liked your little bit of argument, there. To tell you the truth, though, it wasn't a very substantial chapter. Nothing got accomplished besides yelling, especially not if Draco won't even consider what anyone said. It's a good point, by the way, that his beliefs are too deeply ingrained to be reconsidered, even when someone gives him a very logical argument against them. Chapter seemed a little pointless, but funny and well-written. Draco doesn't seem to be doing much so far besides looking cold and angry, but the bit about his beliefs are really, really nice, and good job setting up the tension as far as why he's there and the relationship between him, his father, and Death Eaters.

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, Draco and Ginny had loads of fun biting each others' heads off. I know this chapter was mostly arguing, but like Red mentions in her review, it was kind of a transition chapter. I had to just let them at it, and in the process I think they actually did say some rather substantial things and put a lot of information out on the table, especially when it comes to their beliefs. Thanks for the nice, long review...and constructive criticism is always welcome!
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