Reviews For Heavenly Creatures
Name: lilydarliing reviewed 01 on Feb 24, 2007 01:35 pm
Right, so I haven't even gotten halfway through this chapter, but THIS CAUGHT MY EYE!

"That you have but slumbered here, while we shadows did appear."--that's from Unforgivable, isn't it? Or, rather, it references the story, and I a, SO IN LOVE WITH YOUR WORK!

I absolutely LOVE how you have intertwined all of your stories! It is amazing, and has swept me off of my feet.

Now, this--"Mayhap you fell into sleep on your way to the stairs of Gryffindor Tower, and only dreamed that Robin of Peeves was ever more than what you thought him to be."
-That's from Of Binding Spells and Chartreuse, or, Bound, rather.
SO COOL!

And, this, this is most likely from Jewel of the Harem (which I haven't read yet). "For you were my bosom companion once, yes, my old shipmate, long long ago… Do you remember the salt smell of the air, and the early morning watch, and the feel of the east wind rippling in your hair as you climbed the riggings of the mainmast, Ginny Weasley? Do you recall the Golden Horn, and the seven hills of the queen city Istanbul, rising so fair above the sea at dawn?"

And, this, I think this is a reference to Unforgivable and Of Binding Spells and Chartreuse AKA Bound, I think. “D’you think what you see is the only reality? D’you think you’re living in the only universe? There’s lots of others, oh yes. And there’s one in particular…” He smiled, a mocking, secretive smile. “It lies close, close.”

Wow. SO cool.
I can't WAIT to read the rest. I also wonder, how come you haven't uploaded the rest of Heavenly Creatures? I saw on Fiction Alley that there's eleven chapters there (which I hope is completed, but it really doesn't matter either way. I'm going to finish it off there, but I like this site format much better, so I'm reading this).

Well, I really, truly enjoy your work. I've been in little bouts of squees all day, finding the connections and little, secret intricasies. OOOh! I'm so thrilled.
Name: Grace reviewed 01 on Nov 29, 2006 01:54 pm
I just want to say that this story is awesome!
Name: visitor reviewed 01 on Jul 12, 2006 08:22 pm
The character depiction of Ginny is great. She's a total baby as a teenager, and she's written with such justice that you want to forgive her for being such a brat: a loveable brat.
Name: Starfish reviewed 01 on Jun 20, 2006 07:10 pm
That has to be the longest first chapter i have ever read and i loved every second of it cuz i'm crazy about anything with Sirius in it. I wish he could have lived because i think he would have been a really good supporter and shooulder to lean on during the rest of the story. I can't wait to read the rest!
Name: Aurora-Kerri reviewed 7 on May 07, 2006 08:21 pm
Sorry it got posted twice...it told me there was an error so I tried again.
Name: Aurora Kerri reviewed 7 on May 07, 2006 08:20 pm
I’m sorry, I know it wrong to being a review with an apology but I have reasons behind doing so. I’m sorry I did not discover, read and review your stories sooner. I’m also sorry I have not reviewed after each chapter but the pull to read the next one was too strong to stop and babble on about how awesome all of this is. I believe it is safe to say I’m in love with your writing style. The reoccurring themes and how each story is connected and linked to one another are amazing. Everything from the continuous use of witchlights to the image of limp hands looking like broken wings of a dove to Loki and the Endless. With the reading of each new story or chapter this repetition just makes the world come alive. Not to mention the characterization is perfect to a T. You’re stories are beautiful and I’m angered that this trilogy is not finished because I swear to you not that I moved and tried to click next and it wasn’t there and I cursed aloud. I can’t wait for you to finish this trilogy and I’m hoping you update soon. You’re a very talented author and I am off now to read something else of yours to tide me over until you update again.

-Aurora Kerri
Name: Aurora Kerri reviewed 7 on May 07, 2006 08:19 pm
I’m sorry, I know it wrong to being a review with an apology but I have reasons behind doing so. I’m sorry I did not discover, read and review your stories sooner. I’m also sorry I have not reviewed after each chapter but the pull to read the next one was too strong to stop and babble on about how awesome all of this is. I believe it is safe to say I’m in love with your writing style. The reoccurring themes and how each story is connected and linked to one another are amazing. Everything from the continuous use of witchlights to the image of limp hands looking like broken wings of a dove to Loki and the Endless. With the reading of each new story or chapter this repetition just makes the world come alive. Not to mention the characterization is perfect to a T. You’re stories are beautiful and I’m angered that this trilogy is not finished because I swear to you not that I moved and tried to click next and it wasn’t there and I cursed aloud. I can’t wait for you to finish this trilogy and I’m hoping you update soon. You’re a very talented author and I am off now to read something else of yours to tide me over until you update again.

-Aurora Kerri
Name: ArtemisBeaux reviewed 02 on Feb 21, 2006 04:54 pm
OMG!!!! I totally love your writing. You bring the story to life. Not only that, the story lives on. It is mysterious and perfect. I love how you wrote it and I love the length of each chapter. Like I said before, you are a great author!

Your fan,

~Artie~

PS I'm not really a memeber here. Just a fan. If you want to get in touch with me, please e-mail to tennisbabe_623@yahoo.com. I would really like to learn about how you became such a great author!!
Name: emily reviewed 7 on Feb 17, 2006 07:46 am
Wow!!! is the only to describe that. i am speachless.that is one fantastic story i hope you carry on writing i would love to read more soon.
your a very very talented writer an what a great story line.
thnak you for giving hours of enjoyment with your writing.
from me!!!
Name: lily_lioness reviewed 7 on Dec 07, 2005 05:35 am
I NEED the next chapter!!! My life depands on it, that was amazing!!! :) Update soon!
Name: NNC reviewed 7 on Dec 04, 2005 12:50 am
I'm both confused and tittilated by what's going on. Thanks so much for the update and i hope another comes soon...i love this story!
Name: Esus reviewed 7 on Dec 04, 2005 12:04 am
Just a word: WONDERFUL.
This chapter deserved to be waited for... I mean, I have more doubts than before, but it doesn't matter. I absolutely loved how you described the interaction between George and Ron... Ron's blinding love and George's firmess. I think that he faced Ron in the best way possible, even if something sounded a bit weird. May I suppose that someone else helped him to react like that?
And Hermione, so smart... so smart that didn't understand that maybe Ginny could go to St Mungo just because Morgause used the only spell asmitted by the Sleeping Beauty Spell?
And now? How it's possible that Draco's the real heir of the house of Black? At the end, Sirius was the Mistress's son, isn't he? How it happened that Draco has more rights than him?
Good, good job. Your writing surprise me every time and now I can't really wait until the next update!
Name: Mou Banerjee reviewed 7 on Dec 03, 2005 07:54 pm
Thank you for updating. I am absolutely riveted by your stories as Draco/Ginny is my favourite pairing and I love the Sandman series. I got hooked onto the Jewel of the Harem and then became completely entranced by your world. I love Heavenly Creatures and am waiting for the next instalment with bated breath, as I am waiting for Jewel of the Harem. I loved Of Binding Spells and Chartreuse absolutely. Please update soon, I am begging you.
Name: anna reviewed 01 on Dec 03, 2005 06:37 am
a review before i read the story? well ! you deserve a review just for writing a sequel,that fact alone is marvelous !!!
Name: NNC reviewed 6 on Nov 03, 2005 05:40 am
Though this story is confusing, it calls out to me to figure it out! I MUST know what happens! Please update this as soon as possible?
Name: Irrel reviewed 6 on Oct 02, 2005 02:47 pm
I don't need to tell you this story is very confusing =P I loved it, tho. Sadly, I have the feeling you are going to leave it incomplete, you haven't updated since march! sigh, I hope you continue writting this amazing fanfic.
Name: Mary reviewed 6 on Aug 14, 2005 11:54 am
I absolutely love this story. I am a huge Ginny/Draco fan. I like the bad boy good girl thing they have going. This is the first story I have read with Ginny/Sirius stuff and since then I have been interested, but it's hard to find stories. I like the idea because it's even more bad boy than Draco. Don't worry I still like Ginny/Draco stuff though. I hope that you update soon I can't wait to find out were all of this is going to leave. The story's brilliant and you have a great writing style.
Name: SS Felton reviewed 6 on Jul 08, 2005 08:14 am
I've read the prequel to this and this story. It's great! I love your writing style. All I have to say, is keep it up, please, and make sure to continue. I can't wait for the end of the trilogy. It's too good.
Name: Esus reviewed 6 on Jul 05, 2005 01:55 am
I've read no-stop alle the story from "The Bat-Bogeys Cometh"... and I'm at a loss of word.
This story is absolutely brilliant! I love how you described your characters and the environment: you put the right amount of description, thoughts and actions. I was intrigued by the relationship between Ginny and the other characters: she is both strong and fragile... her temper makes her shine, but it is also the main reason of a lot of stupid actions.
Now, I'm really curious to see what's going to happen: finally, we've found out why Loki is so interested in her and you're starting to explain what is the misterious link between Ginny and Draco.
I was also surprised by your Morgause: she's so vibrant and living! I can feel the wheels in her mind working, her intent of making Ginny find the Lock of Rhiannon was so clear from the beginning... what I didn't understand is why they have forgotten what happened. The kiss, the travel through the portrait, Lucius dialogue with Nott (it happened before the events of TBBC, so why Draco didn't mentioned anything?)...
And may I suppose that Snape is going to bring Draco to the Order? And what's going to happen then?
And Sirius? Why he is so attracted to Ginny (I don't think it's only because she reminds him of Narcissa...) and viceversa?
Last and then I will leave you: you talked about Freud being Malfoy's librarian. Where he makes his first appearance?
Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Name: Chucky reviewed 6 on Mar 20, 2005 12:09 pm
Hey, you forgot to take out several notes of your beta-reader. Just wanted to let u know, apart from that it's good.
Name: lina reviewed 05 on Mar 17, 2005 02:29 pm
holy mother goddess herself,, this is a great story. keep it up!!
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed 05 on Mar 17, 2005 12:27 pm
You weave an interesting tale...I actually like the friendship between Sirius and Ginny...it seems genuine. I am also ready for the return of Draco! Where is he? Update soon please. btw, loved your story 'Bound'
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed 02 on Mar 17, 2005 11:51 am
I loved the rambling that Hermione did just after they saw Draco...wonderful!
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed 02 on Mar 15, 2005 10:26 am
Yay! Now I finally can see the ties between this and Bound and the other one, and this is so exciting! *catches breath* I can't wait to see the rest of Heavenly Creatures, either here or at the other site.
Name: Bartini Girl 03 reviewed 02 on Mar 15, 2005 06:53 am
I just read through the first story and now I have finished what you posted so far. This story has just drawn me in. I cannot wait to see where you take this story.
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