Reviews For In the Long Run
Name: shaded reviewed Chapter Two on Mar 14, 2009 01:32 pm
This chapter was even more interesting than the last, I think. I liked the realism in the argument between Draco, Ginny and Harry. The taunts were very much in-character, especially for their ages. *rolls eyes at immature teenage boys* Hehe, but really, it was good.

I liked the part at the end, when Ginny comes after Draco. It's interesting that Ginny didn't take Draco's hand. I wonder if she would have if he had confirmed being friends? Hmm, I suppose we can only wonder..

I hope that you'll update soon!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter Two on Feb 23, 2007 07:52 am
What a dolt Draco is! This was really fabulous. A great chapter. Very in character and I laughed a little that it took Sirius to get Harry uncontrollable -- not calling Ginny a whore... but Sirius...

very good chapter! ;)
Name: tudorrose1533 reviewed Chapter Two on Feb 01, 2005 11:04 am
Oh! I *like* this fic! Sorry, that sounded so weird, but I really like this story. I'm a runner myself, and I have to say it never crossed my mind that Ginny might be, but now that it has it really fits her! And wow, the whole thing is just really well written. Very streamlined, you could say. No big arguments, even with the punching, it all stays simple and neat. I like fics where D/G don't have nasty banter before getitng to be friends. This was nice and to the point. I'm rambling. In any case, great job, can't wait for an update!
Name: Natasha reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 30, 2005 04:20 pm
Hey I like it! It sounds interesting. Update soon!
Name: Dex reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 19, 2005 02:07 pm
This is such a great story, very original plot. :)
Name: margaret reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 17, 2005 05:50 am
ooohhh wheeee. nice nice nice nice nice!!! :D
Name: Glass reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 15, 2005 08:16 am
This is turning out very, very well! I look forward to the next chapter.
Name: pinksunryse reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 14, 2005 05:02 pm
I love the way he got jelous, it's very in charactar for him! ^_^
Name: emvee reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 14, 2005 03:48 pm
i like this. being friends with a runner, they are creatures of habit and get cranky when they miss a day. i can certainly see d + g running every day. i like your in-character draco a lot..keep going.
Name: Laurels reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 14, 2005 01:57 pm
Another great chapter. Poor Draco thought and stupid Draco all at the same time... he seems to be fighting a losing battle with himself. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 14, 2005 01:08 pm
I'm so enjoying this little story. I tend to be (oddly, I know) very cognizant of verb tense in a fic. If it doesn't flow right, it takes away from the story and I generally don't like things written in present tense. This one really works though - I like how you weave the present "as he nears the tree" with past "she had labelled them". It just flows nicely. That's probaby bizarre feedback but it really struck me as a strong point of the story. I look forward to more.
Name: Ladybleugonewilde reviewed Chapter Two on Jan 14, 2005 01:02 pm
:) I like this story...makes me feel all warm and they eventually help each other stretch? semi-intimate, not lewd...just, you know, trusting....*sighs* I look forward to future chapters!!
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