Reviews For Refraction
Name: Canarielle reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Mar 16, 2005 07:29 pm
I like!! I'm always interested in how different authors imagine the genesis of a relationship between Draco and Ginny. Your version is lovely - Draco redemption is always a good thing. I also found your portrayal of Bill to be excellent; he really comes across as a conscientious and earnest brother (he made a good argument), despite being somewhat of a dickhead initially. And Ginny, of course, is fabulous... and pregnant? =) Can't imagine how that's going to go over with the Weasleys...
Name: Jacquie reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Mar 16, 2005 07:15 pm
Highly enjoyed both chapters. Can't wait to see where you go with this!
Name: Urs--heyurs at LJ reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Mar 12, 2005 02:45 pm
OMG!! This is really good!! Can't wait for more!! Now I'm gonna go read the "smut cookie"--- :) Thanks!!!
Name: zuvalupa reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Mar 12, 2005 12:13 pm
This was a wicked chapter! Brilliant! I enjoyed it thoroughly! I look forward to reading more!
Name: zuvalupa reviewed Breaking Free on Mar 12, 2005 11:58 am
this was wonderful! I love it! you´re an excellent author!
Name: ShortySC22 reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jan 24, 2005 12:23 pm
I absolutely love this story! It's beautifully written and I love how you've characterized everyone. Good job! ^_^
Name: mary reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jan 23, 2005 04:12 pm
haha, that was a great story! i can't wait till the next chapter!
Name: rembrandt reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jan 22, 2005 09:04 am
Excellent chapter...I'm really enjoying this story...it suits the mood and the music I'm listening to currently. Am eagerly awaiting the next bit!
Name: rembrandt reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 22, 2005 08:31 am
oh wow, absolutely wonderful beginning to a story...I love how you have the characters all true to form...and the story is just so great! Love your writing...am eagerly awaiting what else you have for us!
Name: Magali reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jan 21, 2005 03:25 am
Hi A second part, so soon, thank you. Six months later, heh ? it didn't go well. Bill, as the eldest brother, did what he had to go, to bring his sister back into the family, but the road to forgiveness, on both parts, is going to be a long one, especially if, as i suspect, Ginny is pregnant. She is going to be emotive, and not at the right time. Update soon.
Name: cammie reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jan 20, 2005 12:58 pm
loved it... hmmm i think i know why shes not working but i dont want to spoil it for any1 hahah so update soon!
Name: Angie reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jan 20, 2005 12:37 pm
another great chap. hmm, why is ginny really not working... how sad she hasnt seen her family, hopefuuly dhe goes to see them... up-date soon!
Name: draginlover22 reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 20, 2005 10:18 am
HAHA this is quite funny! I hope you update it soon... can't wait to see what they do to Draco when they see him! lol dl

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I have posted chapter 2 and it is awaiting approval from the mods. The Smut cookie is being betaed and chapter 3 is being written.
Name: DScully reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 20, 2005 09:51 am
That was an awesome chapter!! I hope to see more of these soon. Congratulations!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I've just posted Chapter 2 and it is awaiting approval from the mods and Rainpuddle is beta-ing the smut cookie too and I am writing chapter 3. So that is how it all stands at the time being.
Name: T.K. reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 20, 2005 05:41 am
I'm so in love with this story already. How do you manage to make them all so believeable? There's no gaping holes of OOCness, I can see everyone acting and reacting the way that you describe, I just plain love the story. Kudos to you! Just don't forget to update as soon as you possibly can...I can't *wait* to see everyone's reaction to Ginny and Draco showing up.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Name: Virginia reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 20, 2005 05:04 am
I'm already in love with this story. The way they met, the way that they relationship grow, and even the fact the he had to pay for what he done before,going to Azkaban made this fic so diferent from what we are used to see, more real, if that maje any sense... I hope you keep wrtiting this story, because we're in need of fics with good plots and dialogues like this one! Luv Ninia

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I have no idea where the bunny sprung from but this is fast becoming one of my favourite stories to write. I do know what you mean about it seeming more real because Draco went to Azkaban, but I hate stories where Draco or Harry is in Azkaban never-to-be-released-again so I couldn't let him be in there forever. LOL
Name: Magali reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 20, 2005 02:24 am
Hi Well, it's a good beginning, and one which is believable, i think. I mean, the way Draco and Ginny met again, during battle. I hope you plan to write more of this fic, there is definitely more to write about the situation Draco and Ginny are in.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. You will see more twists in the situation before the end I promise you that.
Name: emvee reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 19, 2005 06:41 pm
what great writing! so discriptive. i know how ginny feels. trying to tell your folks something you know they will not be happy about is hard. i hope molly and arthur can see past it..cant wait for the next chap. by the way i looooove the long chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Name: nucking_futs reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 19, 2005 03:54 pm
this is totally awesome and it is plausible for the two of them. I can't wait to see whats next.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Name: Magica reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 19, 2005 03:04 pm
Now why isn't there a second chapter up? Ha, just kidding, take your time. It's an awfully good start and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. Second Chapter is awaiting mod approval although it is rather short...
Name: Sunia reviewed Breaking Free on Jan 19, 2005 02:29 pm
hmmm... I liked it. A little rushed but overrall it's pretty good so far :) Keep it up. ~Sunia

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. It's rushed because I don't want it to end up as a monumental saga 'Exquisite Irony' Style-e.
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