Name: AvidAuror_DM reviewed
Free Choice on Apr 06, 2005 08:39 pm
OMG...i love the way u leave us hanging -the ending with him walking him away raises soo my questions. On the pain of death, plz updqate fast and dont stop til u are finished with the story. Its amazing
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed
Free Choice on Apr 01, 2005 06:38 pm
I like this story, it's quite intriguing and I hope you can update soon!
BTW, loved the line about his look not being brotherly!
Name: Angie reviewed
Free Choice on Mar 26, 2005 06:17 am
love it, love it, love it!
plot was good, pov was excellent, and dialogue was fab!
great fic, cant wait to read more!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Free Choice on Mar 25, 2005 03:37 pm
Mmm- the plot thickens. I like where you're going with this. It seems to be gaining steam as you go. Great stuff!
Name: ruthless reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 28, 2005 04:41 pm
brilliant. absolutely brilliant. update soon!
Name: Dead reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 11, 2005 05:00 pm
I love how the story is going. This chapter is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter to be up and for Draco and Ginny to interact more.
Name: caps reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 10, 2005 11:57 am
I like this story very much. Its a different story line and I can't wait to see just how ginny ginny fares as she learns to manipulate Draco, as well as see Draco's reaction to her attempts. Your stories are always a pleasure to read,and i can't wait to read more of this one
Name: Cinderellen88 reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 10, 2005 09:38 am
Lovely - and so very Lymond Chronicles. I always thought Lymond was the grown up version of Draco. And Ginny is very like Philippa. However, Philippa was too good for Lymond in my opinion...anyway, great story, I can't wait to see where it goes!
Name: Dragonfly reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 09, 2005 02:08 pm
Good plot
I really like the flashbacks a lot
the characters are believable
please continue to write
Name: CindaEdna reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 09, 2005 09:44 am
This is a beautifully written story. I really like your narrative style. Good Job
Name: kelerysalt reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 09, 2005 03:01 am
I've just read up to the fourth chapter, and I have to say, please continue it. The story is intriguing, and the flashbacks aren't distracting, they add more of a backstory and shade the characters. Cheers!
Name: Emeral_eyes reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 08, 2005 07:26 pm
Ah, political intrigue, hidden motivations and absolutely lovely writing! Glad to see a new fic by you, big fan of your other work. One note though; I would suggest going back to using italics to indicate the flashbacks, instead of the 'flashback/end flashback' tags. It was perfectly clear that it was a flash back when you used it in the first chapter, and subsequently, the flashback tags tend to interrupt your otherwise lovely flow. Can't wait to read more soon!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 08, 2005 07:20 pm
I am in love with this story. Don't ask my why - I don't know. I find the plot completely plausible and the tension between the two and...everything!
Name: Embellished reviewed
Marriage Bonds on Feb 08, 2005 05:45 pm
This story has sucked me in completely. I really like the play of past and present, and how uncertain the reader is (or at least I am!) of what anything *really* means.
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed
Trust on Feb 02, 2005 11:59 pm
I'm really intrigued - this has so many possibilities and I'm curious to see where you take it. Excellent start.
Name: Dead reviewed
Trust on Feb 02, 2005 06:36 pm
Once again you've started a truly intriguing story, and I'm hooked. There's so many layers that your story is composed of and I'm anxious to see what is coming up. Excellent work.
Name: potatomaker reviewed
Trust on Feb 02, 2005 01:47 pm
I'm so glad to see that you've started something new. I've always enjoyed your prose and each chapter of this story was beautifully written. Your Draco is ever intriguing and ever perplexing. I'm so curious about his motives and where Ginny belongs in all of this. Please continue. It's so refreashing to see them taken out of the context of Hogwarts and England.