Ew, Draco's a pig here.
omg!!!!! my favorite fic is while you were sleeping. if you go to portkey, there is more of it but still not finsihed. will she ever finish it? im waiting for it!!!!!!!
That is intense! Will go searching for the seaquel as well as the original story!
This is the best fic EVER!!! i love it soooo much
i really liked it! good job. great story. im off to read the one it was based on. keep up the good work. cant wait for the sequel!!
this was a very great spin on the hostage!Ginny stories! I loved how you made him so tormented and through it all Ginny didnt really give in, but she let her feelings grow. Very well done and now im off to read the sequal and While You Were Sleeping!!! Great writing!
Hello, this is a nice begining for a story, I always loved D/G action, not too much fluff :-)
The only thing I noticed is in the line : "And my shoes need cleaned"
It should be "And my shoes need to be cleaned" ;-)
Off to the next chapter I am!
you have to write more it is so good. what happens to draco?
you have to write more. this is so good. and i don't say that about any story.
Omega! You are amazing. And the way that you slowly made their fondness grow, and Malfoy's family issues corrupt his future was just phenomenal. I loved the way that Draco is as he was in schoo, and just as vulnerable, yet powerfull, but steadily grows to know that he can be someone else. At first glance you would think that Ginny Weasley losing her virginity to Draco Malofy, but not by rape, but consensual sex is gross, but one you read it, you understand completely. I was rather angry when there wasn't another NEXT button on the bottom of this chapter, but I must give you your props. I can say anymore, but just know that I am in awe of you.
:) this was wonderful. I still hate Draco for doing what he did to her. But the ending was really really sweet.
"Tell me to stop" that was so hot!!
oh where has he gone?!? give me more of this! i loved it!
there is a sequel, right?!?!
he killed him!?!?
omg, wont he get in trouble?
i hope not!
oh...this should lead to GOOD things...right?!?!
oh merlin! i thought she was done for!
i dont know whether to go "Aww" or "Damn you, you hot bastard"
i will go for both!
That was absolutely brilliant. I'm in agreement that it was a tad rushed and a tad foggy at points, but over all very nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing the sequal of this, as it's quickly become one of my favorite fanfics! Bless it be, Lyss
aw i luv it so very good and way they did it im sorry i like stories with it in it im sorry i guess im a perv lol jk but my buddie britynn absolutly LUVS it!!!haha its funny
draco should like be given an award for being the nicest Death Eater ever
ew flints a perv
aww his mom is nice
OMG!!! HE WAS GOiNG TO RAPE HER!!!!!!!
besides that part where he was beatin her that was so sweet draco IS nice!!!