Name: skully reviewed Chapter Two on Mar 21, 2005 02:47 pm
I think this story is a little predictable. I still would like to see what happens and how exactly "Vampire" is connected to everything, but I'm sure I have a good idea. What would be even better is if you proved me wrong.
Name: Soleil reviewed Chapter One on Mar 20, 2005 04:42 pm
This is great :D I like where the plot is headed. Update soon!!
Name: beads reviewed Chapter One on Mar 19, 2005 04:17 pm
I like it! It has an interesting plot; I'm looking forward to reading more soon.
Name: enchanted18 reviewed Before the Story on Mar 09, 2005 04:35 am
this is really great! poor narcissa...:( she really did hate being a malfoy already; it was so perfect how you summed up her feelings with one word, one name: black, narcissa black. in our culture, that's the lowest insult you could give to your husband, by not honoring his name... wow, keep up the good work!
Name: Pam reviewed Before the Story on Mar 06, 2005 08:38 am
That was really good! Poor Draco and Narcissa :( Lucius needs a good kick in the head. I really loved the last line of the chapter, very touching - I'm sure Draco will keep his promise. Please continue, you have me intrigued!
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