torndeception reviewed Chapter 1: Remus
on Mar 26, 2005 03:32 am
oooh, I can't wait to read more. I'm already in love with Evan, lol.
EnchantedBelle reviewed Chapter 1: Remus
on Mar 25, 2005 01:06 pm
I liked this chapter, sad though cuz of Harry dying and everything. Hope to see an update from you soon!
sweetproserpina reviewed Prologue
on Mar 22, 2005 08:46 pm
good start, I'm eager to find out where she is going to go... Keep up the good work!
imelda reviewed Prologue
on Mar 22, 2005 06:09 pm
Great beginning!! I must confess a certain weakness for H/G (I used to be an HG shipper with a weakness for DG...how the tides have turned). In any case, I thought your prologue was pretty moving, and I liked H/Gs relationship. You could have done without adding the cliched he-pushed-her-away-for-fear-of-her-being-targeted-by-his-enemies thing, though. I liked the twins' support, and the interesting connection you made between the manipulation of both Ginny and Harry, and Remus' role, too. Keep going!