that was an amazing story. i can't belive i read all of it in one sitting. actually i can since i'm suffering from insomnia. look forward to so many more of your stories...hopefully. you did a wonderful job of approaching d/g without being crude to harry's death and i thought it to be one of the best stories i've ever read. just great!!!
You know what I like best about this chapter? That Ginny doesn't let Harry push her away. What did you think of the end of their relationship in HBP?
Author's Response: I thought the end of Harry and Ginny's relationship was pretty predictable. In terms of plot structure, Ginny isn't part of the trio, so she needs to be out of the picture for Book 7. And Harry pushing her away is the easiest way to manage that. On the other hand, it didn't seem like Ginny to allow it to happen, but she did put up a pretty good fight.
i was in tears reading the end of this story. it was great and i really enjoyed it. i especially loved the way you handled the child and mother interaction. it was great. malfoy couldnt have been cuter!
i grinned when i read about the hamburger thing- i can still think of a few places where they'll look at you strange if you request a burger bun!
off to read more chapters...
lovely, lovely, lovely. Could please do a seaquel (i am not a very good speller) or a series. Great story. The plot was perfect.
I absolutely loved this story! I loved the relationship between Ginny and Evan. And the way that Evan excepted Draco in the end. It was very good!! Hopefully you can do a couple of outtakes for this story of even a sequel!! OHH Tha would be really cool and very much appreciated!!
A truly wonderful story.
That was an amazing story!! I cried though about all of it, amamzing job. It wasn't a typically cliche story and it was so cute! I loved it! FANTASIC JOB! Major props.
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That was very sweet and the story's gentle pacing fitted nicely with the "coming home" theme. Well done.
THANK YOU! I loved this story. The epilogue was especially touching. Evan is such a sweet boy!
very great story! i like how things transitioned and evan is a sweet boy.
Hey, I can't believe I just did that. Sorry. lol. I hope you have fun on your trips. My summer break doesn't start for at least another two weeks. Your moving? That sounds like fun. When I moved, it took forever to move stuff in. THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD!!!!! I love it. I can't beleive its over. *starts to cry* lol. I hope you do deciede to make another story to go with this. I am planning on updating my story soon. Great work!
Hi great end to a terrific story:) I loved how you wrote all the characters, you really made them very believable. Excellent Job Well Done:)Also if you ever get inspired to write a sequel that would be so cool. Or maybe just a one or two piece because I would love to see what house Evan got sorted into and also to see how he (Evan) adjusted to Draco, because I am sure that eventually he will bond with Draco and pretty sure that Draco will definitely influence Evan which will effect what house he will get sorted into;) So I really hope that you will definitely write a sequel or a one or two follow up:)
Oh I've just enjoyed this story so much. The epilogue was particularly good - nicely in the future and enough detail to briefly have a sense of where things are at. Like I said, I've really liked this piece. If you have a chance please do write one or two one-shot follow ups. I'd love to know which house Evan gets sorted into!
This has been a lovely story to read, I like the idea of a box to put the locket... I'm also glad you spared us any wedding ceremony details...it's overdone. Nice ending to a wonderful story.
I have loved this story from the beginning it is kind of like seeing a friend leave...but fondly. You have a wonderful talent and I hope that you will again be inspired to write once settled and you have read HBP. We all look forward to that day and the day you write again. Til then. Best wishes in your travels. Kristine
brava brava very cute. As I said before you have done a very good job keeping the characters in cannon (not an easy task) and you transformed Draco withought making him out to be some tragic hero. The thing with the locket was so sweet I almost cried. I loved this story it was a pleasure to read and look forward to anything you may right in the future. And good luck with the move, that's always a pain in the ass.
"The jealous looks made Ginny nervous, but also made her feel a little smug." Well, she certainly has cause to feel smug. This has truly been an excellent fic. You obviously have a lot of talent -- your patience with the characters in letting the attraction develop naturally was refreshing, and I especially enjoyed the way that you wrote Evan. I think it would be awfully hard to be Harry Potter's son, even if he was alive. Your Evan was mature and childish at the same time, very human. It helps that I have a huge crush on anything Weasley (possibly excepting Percy :P), but I loved the way you handled everyone's specific reactions. I suppose this is enough rambling, but anyway, you are a brilliant writer, and I will definitely look forward to reading both the epilogue and anything you have planned for the future.
Great Chapter:) It was really really good. I have really enjoyed this story it was really good. I cannot wait til the epilogue, hopefully it will contain a proposal and maybe if it goes into the future it will contain some info on Evan becoming a big brother;)HINT Anyway great story and you have a really good writing style. Maybe if you have time you might consider doing a sequel to this story:) Excellent Job well done.
I have really loved this story. As I read the last line I sighed....you did mention an epilogue....that would be wonderful...almost as wonderful as a sequel....with a proposal...and Evan becoming a big brother....???....hoping wistfully.... Thank you for such a great story!...Kristine
I love it! This chapter was amazing. Even though it doesn't need a sequal...can you PLEASE make one anyways? I love your writing style. Thanks for reviewing my story. I appriciate it. Keep up the amazing work.
Hey, Thanks for the reivew! I updated my story. I was wondering if you could read it, and tell me what you think of it. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.
thats so sweet, great fic!
This is a great story. I am happy they finally got together. I love that you kept Draco a true Slytherin at heart but opened his heart enough. Please update soon.