dragonfly reviewed #1 Oliver
on Jun 06, 2005 04:44 pm
best songfic ever and i hate songfics
this was truly original and emotional
MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed #1 Oliver
on May 12, 2005 01:51 am
Man, I have suggestions. Suggestions I think you could write beautifully, but I don't want to spoil them by posting them! Email me and we'll chat if you have any interest!
mary reviewed #1 Oliver
on May 10, 2005 12:36 pm
great fic for a great song!
reviewed #1 Oliver
on May 07, 2005 10:22 am
That was beautifully written and very real. I love that song.
eliots_girl reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 04, 2005 04:00 pm
great story:) i cant wait to see the POV's of ginny and draco. job well done:)
Samantha reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 04, 2005 11:09 am
I loved it. The way you used the song as the plot, Oliver, and the sad ending. Brilliant.
Sarah reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 04, 2005 10:05 am
This is one of the best songfics I have read, rather than writing a story and interjecting a few lyrics after a paragraph, you used the "story" from the song and integrated it with the characters. Marvelous job!
Betz reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 04, 2005 08:13 am
Bittersweet. As much as I love a happy ending, I really love something sad and dark with a unhappy ending once in a while. This fit the bill. Everyone got the bad deal in this fic. Loved it. Nicely done!
Glass_Mermaid reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 04, 2005 05:23 am
Very poignant. Good plot, and sad, angsty feel throughout. I liked it! Not to mention, Mr. Brightside kicks ass.
Q reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 04, 2005 04:57 am
What a heartless woman. =(
but yes, terribly well done.
skully reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 03, 2005 06:18 pm
ellimac134 reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 03, 2005 05:24 pm
HOW sad...ahh...gawd...Poor Oliver...Poor Draco...Poor Ginny...pretty much everyone got hurt...so sad...BUT
I Loved the story...it was a great one!
reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 03, 2005 04:59 pm
Ooh. This is so painful and touching! Nice job!
imelda reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 03, 2005 04:46 pm
Ouch. What a marvelous, awful fic. I really liked the Oliver you created; I felt so bad for his impotence, his inability to stop what was going on. I'm sorry it ended the way it did, and I actually hope she and Oliver find some happy medium someday, which actually seems completely plausible, given the story. Nicely done; I'm still hurting.
tudorrose1533 reviewed #1 Oliver
on Apr 03, 2005 04:39 pm
I really enjoyed reading a D/G fic from Oliver's perspective. Unlike most fics where Ginny cheats on Harry with Draco, with Oliver as the forgotten husband, you actually feel bad for him. Your characterization of Oliver was truly, truly spot on.
Also, the way you had time pass was smooth and easy to understand. And, as much as I enjoy smut, it would have distracted from the true emotion in this piece.
Your choice of words and style are beautiful. The only nitpick I have is the use of "dollars" instead of Galleons, or pounds. Otherwise, perfect! I can't wait for the next parts.
PS--I also really like the name Lukas! Excellent choice.