I reviewed before telling you to space things out. I had only read the first chapter. I've seen people before who really didn't know how to spread things out, and it's really annoying. But, I realized by the third that you were using it as a tool. You were trying to confuse the reader and make them feel slightly off. It is still hard to read, but I like the idea. So I take back what I said before: you don't need to change the spacing. There are definite consequences to having it this way, but there are also advantages and this is very much effective.