Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
One-Shot on Oct 03, 2006 05:22 pm
The emotional impact of something so simple as their first touch and how that leads to growing attraction and affection makes for a great and hot romantic story. Good job.
Name: Halliex3 reviewed
One-Shot on Oct 02, 2006 03:34 am
I could have melted into a puddle right on the floor. i love this story. its so sweet. :) keep it up.
Name: Brianna reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 30, 2006 06:15 am
Wow. So...soooo hot. I love the imagery I got from the line, "In their arguments he would often crowd her space, making her step back until he had her pushed up against the wall with his body lightly pressed against her own." *fans self* Gah...
Name: Desire reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 25, 2006 05:58 pm
I love it! Please tell me you're going to keep writing this story! It's one of my favorites!
Name: Lunis reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 22, 2006 09:51 am
O.O
Name: moogle reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 18, 2006 09:38 pm
Cute adorable and all that fluffy goodness. I LOVED IT *Thumbs up*
Thank you for writing this awesome story!!
Name: DrowningOphelia reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 16, 2006 10:09 am
Short and sweet. I loved it.
Name: ice reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 13, 2006 02:44 pm
xD. Do you get manicures?
Wonderfully light and sweet. Great job, hun.
Name: ThisBurningHeart reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 12, 2006 04:22 pm
Wonderful. Really, it is. I love it.
Name: Kisou reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 11, 2006 09:51 pm
Sweet. It did seem to end a little too fast. Almost like it wasn't over. I don't know; maybe you were going for that feeling. But it did feel rather unnatural.
Name: DracosGal reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 10:57 pm
Ooooo! Great story i don't.... lol that was funny when she asked if he got manicures!
- DracosGal
Name: darkestrose reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 08:04 pm
HA! I found it. ::evil grin:: when she kissed his fingertips by accident I was freaking out! How embarassing..I LOVE the ending, him pushing her up against the wall is hot. The fact that she sighs is so cute. awesome story dude.
Name: emvee reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 06:02 pm
Lovely story. what great discriptions! have you considered doing a follow-up? Looking forward to your next piece.
Name: Myst reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 04:00 pm
Very very sexy... you've a talent for making an encounter sensual without being tawdry. I enjoy your writing. =)
Name: Rashonda reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 08:08 am
It's great this story was featured or I never would have come across it. There are no rules of attraction when it comes to these two. Great Job.
Name: wizilover reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 05:08 am
hi,
absolutely loved ur story. the phrasing was brilliant, it really came alive for me. thank you.
Name: MissMalfoyxx reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 10, 2006 04:59 am
wow. that was really cool. bravo!
Name: CCC reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 09, 2006 06:24 pm
That was very good. Good job.
Name: missblacksquirel reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 09, 2006 01:00 pm
hehe cute. very adorable
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 09, 2006 11:04 am
~HEHE...WOW. I love it.~
Name: I'm Blond, James Blond. reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 09, 2006 09:41 am
Haha, I like the manicure-comment!
I like your story, but it doesn't make much sense, and it doesn't really have an end, don't you think?
Name: Katrina_M reviewed
One-Shot on Sep 09, 2006 07:41 am
I loved this! Definatly now one of my favorite one-shots! I loved the last line, "However, when his lips finally found hers, she decided that she just wouldn’t think anymore." Brillantly written.
Name: mo reviewed
One-Shot on Jul 29, 2006 03:36 pm
i liked it! it was verrrrrrry sexy! if a story can be defined that way! Anyways Great Job!
Name: Beanie reviewed
One-Shot on Jun 12, 2006 05:08 pm
Manicured hands. *gigglesnort* I always knew Draco was a dweeb.
Name: Mynuet reviewed
One-Shot on Jan 03, 2006 03:13 am
That was a really cute story. :) I liked the way that you showed how something so small can make the difference in matters of attraction.