Name: Ice_Dragon reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 23, 2007 12:09 pm
like it but why frost i mean the name is so last year
Author's Response: Well, I guess considering Ch 5 was written in 2006 I pretty much hit the mark on that one, huh?
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 23, 2007 05:16 am
this is so good you haven't updated in so long please please please update!
Name: ZSF reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 20, 2007 03:14 pm
Oh! Poor, poor Ginny! That last bit made me laugh and cringe like anything!
Name: ZSF reviewed
Chapter Two on Mar 20, 2007 02:50 pm
I love this story already! Their wonderful banter is so entertaining and witty, and I'm glad that Ginny finds Malfoy extremely attractive without falling over herself.
Name: Hopeless reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 17, 2007 12:50 pm
i love the great simplicity of ginny and dracos subtle relationship here. love it.
Name: Mynuet reviewed
Chapter Five on Feb 25, 2007 07:48 am
*weeps tears of bitter pain over the continued lack of continuation*
Name: darksideofthemoon reviewed
Chapter Five on Nov 26, 2006 05:03 pm
ooooh, ginny's got competition! update?
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Chapter Five on Nov 20, 2006 06:15 am
*looks left and right* Where is the rest! I need more! This story was phenomenal! Please update soon.
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter Five on Oct 19, 2006 06:19 pm
Imagine my horror to discover that this is the most recent chapter and that I have absolutely no chance of finding out what will happen if you don't update? My goodness :( Well, I certainly adore this fic. Please--really, I implore you--please update soon! Great job with this story. I cannot wait for your next installment!
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter Two on Oct 19, 2006 02:57 pm
Hehe, v cute
Name: Myst reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 29, 2006 04:29 am
"But he's Draco Malfoy, and Draco Malfoy is a right bastard. And as far as I'm concerned, right bastards ought not look like sex on a stick."
*laughs her arse off*
Just for this quote, I love you.
Name: Matinee reviewed
Chapter Five on Aug 26, 2006 06:43 am
ooh, i really liked this story, please, please continue it soon :)
Name: carrothead reviewed
Chapter Five on Jul 28, 2006 07:24 am
Oh, my goodness! The story is so exciting! I couldn't wait for the next chapters. I practically screamed when I realized that it was only until chapter five. Haha! Keep 'em coming!!!! You're doing a phenomenal job!!!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter Five on Jul 17, 2006 06:05 pm
~Oh no...that sucks for ginny. Cant wait for an update!!~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter Four on Jul 17, 2006 05:57 pm
~Love how you put the whole "Fire and Ice" into it.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter Three on Jul 17, 2006 05:47 pm
~Wonderful Chapter.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter Two on Jul 17, 2006 05:36 pm
~So Great. I just love it.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter One on Jul 17, 2006 05:29 pm
~Nice start. Cant wait to read more.~
Name: Padfootedmoony reviewed
Chapter Five on Jul 16, 2006 11:01 am
This is amazing. Keep up the great work. I love this fic and I hope to read more soon!
Name: Megan reviewed
Chapter Five on Jun 25, 2006 01:48 pm
More more more more more! I love how this is going.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter One on May 20, 2006 07:34 pm
The first sentence of this fic is really an extremely amusing sentence. But, it seems like one of those sentences that doesn't seem to want to work. The sentence is:
"For not the first time in my life I bemoaned the fact that procrastination and I got along so dreadfully famously."
You have two issues here. The first one is small: You should probably say "not for" as opposed to "for not" as, generally, that is how people speak, though, I'm sure, not always. The next problem was the one is gotsnape's review and it is a little bit more annoying. It's the two "ly"s in the phrase "dreadfully famously." Though it is nice to have adjectives, here you would be much better off simply saying "famously". Not only would it get rid of that strange sounding, slightly confusing phrase, but it would be just as workable and just as funny.
Also, you need a comma after life.
Sorry for being so nit picky. I realize this is my third review. (The last one was actually meant for the whole story, though, and ended up on the first chapter.) But, I'm a beta, and a very OCD one at that. I dislike leaving pointless reviews, which is good, I think, but which forces me to tell more talented people far more that they want to hear about small problems. (You see, the less talented people have more that simply small problems, and I don't feel quite as bad being specific and critical then.)
Again, I apologize for making you read several paragraphs about one sentence, but I think that it's always good to know what other people think because this should be an environment for learning (in my opinion) and though the teachers are also our peers, which makes them harder to listen to, we have a lot to learn from them if we're willing to listen.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter One on May 20, 2006 07:19 pm
I might have already sent a review, but I found this story extra amusing, so I read what's here again. Keep it up. I'm really quite looking forward to the next chapter. You're Draco doesn't quite take in the fact of his sixth year at Hogwarts and all that unless he's one of those exceptionally strong people that can get over something like his childhood with nothing much ill to say for it. Well, in character, or even out of character (I can't believe I'm saying this. I'm a total canon Nazi most of the time.) this is working. So, keep it up.
Name: tuulia reviewed
Chapter Five on Apr 25, 2006 01:49 am
i just read the story and i loved it! are you still writing on it? i hope so!!
Name: patricia reviewed
Chapter Five on Apr 22, 2006 02:00 pm
very nice please continue with this story i'm really liking this story!
Name: spider reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 29, 2006 03:52 pm
Oh no! I just saw that there aren't any more chapters at the moment. Ah well, I'm loving the story so far. Ginny's dream and her reaction upon seeing Draco only moments later had me in stitches. Can't wait for the update! Great job so far.