Reviews For Getting Personal
Name: ellimac134 reviewed Waiting on Jun 23, 2005 06:56 pm
hi! i really like what i have rad so far...good job! totally love the plot...can't wait for the next chapter!!
Name: saucy reviewed Funeral For A Friend on Jun 22, 2005 08:03 pm
-Gasp- it was a trap! It was a trap, right? Fudge isn't really Fudge is he? But a D.E. using a polyjuice potion? Huh? Huh, huh? Okay... I'll stop being a dork now.... Great chapter, by the way.
Name: IndyCICURN reviewed Readjusting on Jun 18, 2005 09:28 pm
Dear, dear, sweet woman, how deluded you are if you think that even though you gave us three chapters that we would be happy with that...oh ywah wait, I am. But that doesn't mean that I don't more. Once again I must say that I am constantly in awe that you can write not only one fantastic amazing story but you can do two and keep them both unique, interesting and compelling to read. Thanks again for sharing your talent with us..Kristine
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Losing It on Jun 18, 2005 02:53 am
I love your stories...but (there's always a but) you NEED a beta. If you already have one, you need to get another. I really do enjoy your writing but I get so distracted from it by all the blatant tense errors and such. I can't believe that my stories get sent back for comma errors and such...makes me think someone isn't paying attention or someone blatantly doesn't like me. Anyway, I'm not trying to be harsh at all...I just wish you'd be a bit more patient and get a beta.
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Losing It on Jun 17, 2005 05:05 am
It is not that I think that Ginny is a horrible, bad, slutty person for sleeping with Draco. It is just sad that this experience that should have been wonderful between two people who love each other, is tainted as she is using it to punish herself. So that when she looks back on her first time both in totality but also her first time with Draco, she will see it as not a happy event. Sad. For both of them. Sometimes we do go to our lover to take away the pain with pleasure but it sad that this is how her first time will be remembered. Fabulous story though...makes me wonder if the last refers only to making her his by branding her his with the intimacy or if he has given her more then just his love...a little strawberry blond to watch grow....maybe?....hmmm.....
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Left Behind on Jun 17, 2005 04:51 am
Wow! All I can say is wow. I never expected that it would be Ginny left behind...stupid of me when I read the title of the chapter but still....wow
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Hickeys and Owls on Jun 17, 2005 04:44 am
ROFL!! Draco better keep his mouth off visible places for awhile...lol..
Name: Aliya DarkFairyof Slytherin reviewed Busted on Jun 15, 2005 04:21 pm
ooo talk about committed. good lord hes hooked on her! wow i wish there were more guys like that in the real world. well its been an interesting story so far. im waiting to see what u have planned after the stalling wears off. and how long the knickers will stay on ...hehehe just update and ull be fine
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Busted on Jun 15, 2005 05:24 am
It is difficult to keep coming up with new ways to say how wonderful an author's writing is, so I will just say "Loved IT!" One reviewer said that they thought these last two chapters were a bit rushed. I didn't think so, I thought that though there was a quick pace it was important for these two chapters. It showed the intensity of the events and the importance of them. Corse, Ginny obviously has more self control then I do....lol....Lie in a bed with Draco and NOT sleep with him....sigh...I couldn't do it....guess I am just a wanton woman...lol....Not that my husband complains.... tee hee tee hee
Name: Pam reviewed Busted on Jun 14, 2005 07:55 pm
I loved this chapter! It was my favorite. Poor Ginny, almost getting caught by her room mates then getting caught by Hermione. But seriously, if I was laying in bed half naked with Draco Malfoy, I would want everyone to know anyway lol. Awesome job!
Name: Funnykido reviewed Busted on Jun 14, 2005 06:39 pm
You evil author, trying to guilt people into reviewing are we? Lol. This chapter, and the last, seemed a bit rushed, but I can see where Ginny comes from, liking somebody a lot, or loving them, but not knowing why, etc etc. Can't wait until the next chapter!
Name: Funnykido reviewed Breakdown on Jun 13, 2005 04:53 pm
I'm not sure if I've reviewed yet. . but I really love this story, too. The writing is good, and the story is good, also. I love how you make Draco have a breakdown, and almost cry. I hate it when it's always Ginny that cries, and she does it constantly. But Draco refuses to cry because it's not 'manly' or they're too egotistical to do it. So I really loved how you showed this 'sensitive' side of him. Harry seems a bit OOC, although I can't put a figure down on HOW, but I wouldn't worry about it, because it's hard for anybody to write Harry wyhen they don't know what he'll be like in the sixth book. Good job and I can't wait until you update!
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Breakdown on Jun 13, 2005 10:03 am
I can not believe that no one has yet to review to these two new chapters. Perhaps they are in shock that you could actually believe that two new chpaters would satisfy our craving for more of the story. Oh my, gotta love this chapter. My only concern is that while I don't mind a man who crys, in fact I admire a man that can show emotion, it just made Draco seem a tad weak. That was not meant as a criticism, just a comment. I assume you just wanted to show Draco as human and vunerable and it worked well as a segway into getting he and Gin back together. I don't know something in me just has a hard time seeing Draco as weak. Is it just me? Perhaps it is. I have loved all the books, and the movies, but when I read the books I get more of a sense of a prideful Draco. Please don't take it as criticism because I adore this story and your writing! It just must be me as I was dissapointed in the way that Draco was protrayed in the movie POA. He seemed to weak and whiney, cowardly. Not the way I picture Draco... Even though I haven't been as praising in this review as I usually am (though I still think it was great!)...will you please still update soon??
Name: EnchantedBelle reviewed Something I'll Regret on Jun 01, 2005 01:40 pm
Please upadate soon!
Name: distempered reviewed Something I'll Regret on May 23, 2005 08:58 am
This is very good so far. I'm still a little confused about Draco's motivations, but I'm sure they will become clearer later. Continue soon.
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Something I'll Regret on May 22, 2005 05:56 pm
I am really enjoying this story. I enjoy seeing Draco know what he wants but struggle to balance that with what he has to do and what he is to do. The really crappy thing about reading the new chapters is knowing it will now be awhile until new ones come out....sigh...waiting for more....keep up the good work...Krisitine
Name: tulzdavampslayer reviewed Something I'll Regret on May 21, 2005 06:23 pm
ooooh... this is good. At first I was a bit worried, because it was so similar to a few others I've read, but the story's coming up with all these little individual bits that are all its own! well, yours I suppose... okay I know I'm crazy you don't have to rub it in... I'm looking forward to your next update!
Name: Cassy reviewed The Ball on May 14, 2005 09:10 am
OMG PLZ WRITE MORE!! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!
Name: EnchantedBelle reviewed The Ball on May 13, 2005 03:29 pm
That's a good chapter. can't wait until you update.
Name: Serpentina reviewed The Ball on May 11, 2005 05:29 am
ooh, i can't beleave you left a cliffy! so, is draco goin to talk to harry or does he want sex? update! update! update!
Name: Serpentina reviewed The Ball on May 11, 2005 05:29 am
ooh, i can't beleave you left a cliffy! so, is draco goin to talk to harry or does he want sex? update! update! update!
Name: darkangelchic reviewed Now I'm a Death Eater? on May 10, 2005 03:58 pm
good story. i like it, but im not really into story's where characters are OOC. sorry.
Name: imelda reviewed Now I'm a Death Eater? on May 10, 2005 11:25 am
I like this story. It's not a new plot, you know? We've all seen DG storylines like this. But I am very interested in the way you're writing Draco; currently his motives are very mysterious. I like the way, too, that Ginny isn't really actively choosing to do these things with Malfoy...she just keeps acting on instinct...but she stands by her choices.
Name: Dex reviewed Now I'm a Death Eater? on May 01, 2005 03:51 pm
This story is Jawesome! That's right you get a J. I love it. I hope you can get the next chapter out soon.
Name: chuya reviewed Dates on Apr 28, 2005 07:59 am
Great chappie ^^ Long live house unity :)
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