Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed Prolouge on Jan 04, 2007 10:34 am
Kind of short, and not much character introduction. It it alright for a start, but you should really work more on the next chapter, so there is more depth and you can generate more interest.
Name: Serenitey reviewed Prolouge on Apr 08, 2006 03:13 am
well that was just mean! so short without an immediate next... im intrigued. update soon! :D
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