Name: rockmysocks8687 reviewed
protective instinct on Nov 12, 2006 06:01 pm
"For an instant - for an eternity - Draco emitted a terrible sound, writhing."
That is gorgeous. I liked the action in this chapter. Not too dramatic, not too rushed.
Name: hummie reviewed
protective instinct on Nov 11, 2006 05:15 pm
I loved Draco's looking on Goyle and Crabbe fondly. Mostly I read about how Draco doesn't think much of them. Well done!
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 25, 2005 11:04 am
Great story. Love the last scene with them saving/helping eachother. I also really like the simple quotes you put at the beginning of each chapter. Update Soon!!!!!!!!!
Name: ronlover reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 25, 2005 06:04 am
I like it! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
Name: Amihan reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 21, 2005 09:12 pm
Good stuff:
1. Your mastery of grammar and syntax is admirable.
2. The plot is more unique than most.
3. The characterizations are close to perfect.
4. Your subtle touch with romance is superb.
Bad stuff:
1. A few typos. Nothing that you can't correct.
2. IT'S NOT BEING UPDATED ENOUGH!
I'll read this when you continue it. :D
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 20, 2005 09:11 pm
Neat story, I am enjoying it already!
Name: O-lan reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 19, 2005 05:51 am
I especially love the part where Draco takes the Cruciatus Curse for Ginny. I hope you update this soon, you talented writer, you! ^_~
Name: catalina reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 18, 2005 12:10 am
*applauds and chants* MORE! MORE! MORE!
Name: Santiago reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 17, 2005 11:00 am
Nice plot! I think it's very interesting and promising, and I like the way you portray ALL of the characters! Good luck and update soon!
Name: Clarissa reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 17, 2005 07:13 am
This is getting good! Damn, but I love it when I come across a great writer/story. I can't wait for more. Update soon, please! :)
Name: magdalena reviewed
protective instinct on Jun 16, 2005 06:02 pm
This is excellent. You have written one of the best Quiditch scenes that I've read, and it just keeps getting better.