Name: eleanora reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Feb 07, 2010 10:11 am
this is so amazing. i wish there were more chapters.
Name: bad_angel_109 reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Dec 12, 2009 05:41 am
cute, interesting. any more? :)
Name: lookwhatidid reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jan 04, 2009 08:41 pm
This is a fantastic beginning, I am very excited to see where you take the plot! The way you incorporated both of their births together is very intriguing, especially since I've now got a little nag about whether the prophecies are even true! Please continue! =]
Name: Jessica Malfoy reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Apr 12, 2007 02:42 pm
I love it!! 2 of my fave things. Draco Ginny and Mythology! I cant wait to read more.
Name: skyfalcon21 reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Apr 16, 2006 03:54 pm
Would Andrew happen to be Sir Andrew Llyod Webber? And would his Muggle masterpiece happen to be "The Phantom of the Opera"? If so, I love you even more now! Keep up the good work, and might I add that I love the use of Latin in your story, and who cares if Cassandra is Greek?
Name: kitty reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Mar 05, 2006 03:24 am
hey,
interesting plot! please continue!
kitty
Name: WG reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Feb 24, 2006 11:46 am
WOW - fab start - hope u update this soon!
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 13, 2005 03:24 pm
Well written with a compelling plot that is already pushing the story forward in a heart stopping direction. I want to know more, now! That is my definition of a great story. I encourage you to keep writing until you are finished! I'll be reading.
Name: Sue Bridehead reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 07, 2005 10:03 am
I like what I'm seeing so far - very interesting. The pacing and flow seemed to be right. And it's so cool that you actually know Latin (I just make mine up as I go)! I was a bit confused where it said that Lucius was distraught then it said he was cool a minute later; that part may need to be reworded-? And yes, you will find a beta reader to be indispensable. Overall, a very good start! :)
Name: Bina reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 06, 2005 04:55 pm
See, I told you the intro was good. It seems like the masses agree with your Brit-fix editor. Can't wait for the rest of it.
Name: LadyJade86 reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 03, 2005 08:37 pm
whew that is a good start. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Name: Pam reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 03, 2005 03:00 am
That was a very good first chapter! I hope you will continue because I think you have a lot of talent and I'm interested to see where this story will lead. Nice work.
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 02, 2005 08:42 pm
This story sounds so cool! I know that has to be the most adolescent adjective, but it was the first thing that came to mind when I finished the chapter *smiles sheepishly*
I've read a lot of D/G stories, and I believe I've read a few with prophesies, but this is the first I've seen like this... I can't wait to see what happens...if your going to grow up with them or fast forward to when they're old enough to fall in love, ect.
Just some fangirly love for some great writing which I hope inspires more :)
xoxo
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 02, 2005 08:29 pm
I think that was a really good start. I like how you incorporated the prophesy and both births. I had a few things I would have given you feedback on if I was a Beta (just - some language at the start that I thought didn't fit with the mood you evoked). If you're still looking for a beta, email me. Your writing style is good and I look forward to more of the story.
Name: Wyvern159 reviewed
Prologue: Astra Non Metiuntur on Jun 02, 2005 06:45 pm
Wow, I love this story already! The latin actually accentuated it's appeal to me; it adds such a nice touch. I really, really hope you update soon because the plot line is promising. Greek Mythology kicks ass!