I have actually been waiting for a few days to review this, so I can get it right.

I am a bit curious to know why Ron killed Ginny, or exactly how that even happened. And the next chapter, that was some deep stuff in there, it took a few re-reads to get it.

Good job at a Dramatic fic.

STT was HERE

Devastation -- that's the first word that came to mind, or feeling I guess. I will eagerly await the last chapter, though I can't imagine how you will resolve it. Excellent writing.

Oh my god. Oh, how unbearable. You had to tack on that evil last line, didn't you? I thought Draco might kill himself, when he let Ginny go, but I don't know if you'll do that. I'll have to wait and see. Oh, I'm crying and it's just so awful. How did it happen? Why? Is this what's in store for us in your other fics? :-(

Ok, you have been there, I am sure. You are sitting in your car and right before your eyes, a tragic auto accident unfolds. You KNOW it is coming, there is nothing that can stop it, you try HARD to look away but your eyes are fixed to the spot. When IT does occure, even while it is taking place, you keep asking yourself, "Why are you so freaking surprised?" That is how I felt while reading this last chapter. I knew what was coming from the moment Draco utter that one quote. I could have put the story down right there and saved myself a terrible sinus headache from the tear, but like with the accident, I couldn't take my eyes off the pages. You wicked, wicked witch! You captured my interest with your story, your take on the awful rape of Ginny, and it was rape; the delightful way you handled your characters and the ways each one responded to the attack. There was no way, even though I knew it was coming, to protect myself from the blow, the horrible impact and the pain. I had to go outside and wash my truck just to give my body something to do whilst my brain attempted to come to grips with what you have done. The last time I felt this about a piece of writing was "Dances with Wolves." After finishing that book, I flung it across the room, never to read it again. Like Wolves, yours is a beautifully written story. You have a talent for allowing the readers to come to feel for the characters, even after reading oodles of stories about them from hundreds of points of view. Did I just write oodles out loud. Forgive me. OMG! Like Draco asked Ginny...SOB! The last line of your tale with ring with me for the remainder of the day, if not longer. I have never seen a story wrapped up, or summed up so well with so few words. I could feel the hollow hole in his chest. Crap! Now I must go mow the lawn!!

You know, I bet you can. ;)

Oh my God! This story was really good until you decided to kill Ginny. No, it's still good even though you killed Ginny. The first time you wrote that quote into the story "Man plans, God laughs", I knew this story was going to be heavy with irony. Draco thought he was going to die, but ironicly he instead killed Ginny while trying to save her. I'd liked to say I wasn't suprised by how you chose to go about it, but the way you chose the death scene was perfect. Perfect in every way of that quote. It fits with the story. I'm excited about the last chapter. Can't wait to see what you've brewed up. ~Aya

Oh my God! This story was really good until you decided to kill Ginny. No, it's still could even though you killed Ginny. The first time you wrote that quote into the story "Man plans, God laughs", I knew this story was going to be heavy with irony. Draco thought he was going to die, but ironicly he instead killed Ginny while trying to save her. I'd liked to say I wasn't suprised by how you chose to go about it, but the way you chose the death scene was perfect. Perfect in every way of that quote. It fits with the story. I'm excited about the last chapter. Can't wait to see what you've brewed up. ~Aya

oh my bum. he killed her. I'm going to cry now.

Oh my dear lord! That was so sad! I can't believe she's dead, how are you going to end this? That's going to be difficult from what i can tell. Oh! He never got to tell her he loved her!! This is so sad!...GOOD JOB!