Reviews For Unforgivable
Name: Pam reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 07:12 am
::tries not to cry:: Oh there better be some happy-bunny-feelings in the next chapter. Unless you're TRYING to depress me forever! But the writing was very good, so kudos to you!
Name: Mynuet reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 07:09 am
You know, I bet you can. ;)
Name: slymom reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 03:25 am
This is so tragic!! I had hoped that they would have been together. Please update soon! I have to know what happens to Draco.
Name: gypsybaby21 reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 08:38 pm
Oh my God! This story was really good until you decided to kill Ginny. No, it's still good even though you killed Ginny. The first time you wrote that quote into the story "Man plans, God laughs", I knew this story was going to be heavy with irony. Draco thought he was going to die, but ironicly he instead killed Ginny while trying to save her. I'd liked to say I wasn't suprised by how you chose to go about it, but the way you chose the death scene was perfect. Perfect in every way of that quote. It fits with the story. I'm excited about the last chapter. Can't wait to see what you've brewed up. ~Aya
Name: IndyCICURN reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 08:38 pm
Oh my...Should know that you are an exceptional writer when you have brought people to tears.......Lord I am crying over a silly story :::::feeling like a whimp now:::: But damn if it wasn't good....sigh...will wait for the next chapter with a heavy heart.
Name: gypsybaby21 reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 08:37 pm
Oh my God! This story was really good until you decided to kill Ginny. No, it's still could even though you killed Ginny. The first time you wrote that quote into the story "Man plans, God laughs", I knew this story was going to be heavy with irony. Draco thought he was going to die, but ironicly he instead killed Ginny while trying to save her. I'd liked to say I wasn't suprised by how you chose to go about it, but the way you chose the death scene was perfect. Perfect in every way of that quote. It fits with the story. I'm excited about the last chapter. Can't wait to see what you've brewed up. ~Aya
Name: Esus reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 08:13 pm
I'm going to cry every tear I have... he killed her! For one he wasn't sellfish and it ended in the wrong way!
*Desperate sigh*
Believe me, for a second I thought Ginny had hit Ron's head with a chair... I badly wished for it. But realisation came fast and hit me hard as a bludger.
A part from my personal reaction, I should compliment with you: your way of writing stuns me. I can feel you characters emotions and your descriptions of Draco suddend maddness after Ginny's death it's one of the best pieces I've ever read.
So, there is another chapter? I fear what you're going to show us in it, but I can't wait to read!
Name: Q reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 07:46 pm
oh my bum. he killed her. I'm going to cry now.
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 07:18 pm
Wow. That all happened so fast. Hmmm....so, how will it end...huh?
Name: Ginerva reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 05:56 pm
Oh my dear lord! That was so sad! I can't believe she's dead, how are you going to end this? That's going to be difficult from what i can tell. Oh! He never got to tell her he loved her!! This is so sad!...GOOD JOB!
Name: *love*in*shadows* reviewed 9 on Jun 19, 2005 04:32 pm
wow...there are no other words to express this emotion...this story is VERY well written...the end of chapter nine has left me in shock...no tears because i am just too shocked...again, wow...
Name: Esus reviewed 8 on Jun 19, 2005 08:05 am
I read all the chapters together and now I don't know what to say...
You did a great job: you are dealing with a hard subject, but you describe it in a realistic way. Differently for most of the fictions I've ever read, here there isn’t a Ginny who fell in love with Draco immediately after being violated by him.
Her healing process started when she took her revenge on him... and we are really talking of a equal violation: I agree with your explanation about the Unforgivable curses. I always wondered why those spells were differentiated from the others: there are many ways to kill and to give pain, so why those spells are Unforgivable? Probably because they affect not only the victim, but also the caster…
But now I’m really curious to see what is going to do Ron (who is clearly mad) and how the two can start a real life with their emotions back.
Name: Ginerva reviewed 8 on Jun 19, 2005 07:07 am
Good! Very good! The only reason people would hate this chapter is because Ron is going to hurt Draco and that's just morally and ethically wrong! But besides that it was very good, you've done amazing thigs for this story, keep it up! Good job.
Name: Stacy reviewed 8 on Jun 19, 2005 04:52 am
I'm not really sure why anyone would hate this chapter - except for that fact that Draco is going to be in lots of pain when Ron is done with him, I suppose. It was really good, as is the rest of the story. I have to admit I was a little wary because rape fics are rarely well done. I'm really impressed that you've made everything feel genuine and believable, and your actual writing and style is lovely, as usual :o)
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed 8 on Jun 19, 2005 03:41 am
I loved it! Actually, I'm not sure why others would hate it. I'm totally sold on this entire story and I'm really curious to see what comes next. Great work.
Name: anon reviewed 8 on Jun 18, 2005 09:31 pm
evil end!!!!!!!!please add on its sooooo good!!!
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed 8 on Jun 18, 2005 08:40 pm
Loved it! Very Powerful. Great images...:::blushing::: Funny I should have figured out that it was Ron when the shadow was mentioned coming down the hall..but I didn't see it coming, I must be off of my game. Can't wait til more is posted...Kristine
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed 8 on Jun 18, 2005 08:08 pm
It's all so complicated...i guess it's supposed to be. Ron will definitely be mad, but Ginny was on top, the dominant postion. It means that Draco didn't force anything on her. But my question is, is why was she mouthing the word "No" at climax...was it because she wasn't ready yet, because of Ron, or because of something she's dealing with inside?
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed 8 on Jun 18, 2005 05:17 pm
yikes! ron's not going to kill him is he? cause that would be horrible. well, i'm glad you're updating this story quickly; i really do like it. great job! ~jessakitty
Name: MeetTheMalfoys reviewed 7 on Jun 18, 2005 02:26 pm
Bravo miss, Bravo.
Name: unknown reviewed 7 on Jun 18, 2005 10:38 am
i love it, please update soon
Name: bellasol67 reviewed 7 on Jun 18, 2005 03:06 am
I like that I can feel the tension between the two characters...the conversation feels stilted and everything between them seems appropriate considering what has happened.
Name: johanna reviewed 7 on Jun 17, 2005 02:48 pm
you made a reference to hermione punching malfoy in third year, but that isnt canon. in the books, she slapped him (at least in the american edition). A small mistake, but one thats always bothered me.
Name: imelda reviewed 7 on Jun 17, 2005 10:52 am
Wow. Yeesh. Now I'm really antsy to read the next chapter. Also, I'm glad this is going to be different from all the fluffy similar fics; knowing you, I should have known it would be from the beginning.
Name: Madeline Jones reviewed 06 on Jun 15, 2005 08:50 pm
I really like the way you are handling such a very intense subject. Looking forward to more.
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