Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Dec 19, 2006 03:39 pm
~Oh...how sweet of draco.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Aug 31, 2006 04:35 pm
~Another perfect chapter. I saw some minor spelling mistakes, but i cant complain.~
Name: LenaNectaris reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Feb 22, 2006 11:37 am
One flaw that I can see. Students aren't allowed to use magic outside of school, and unforgivable curses are definitely out of the picture, so hermione shouldn't be able to have tested the potion.
Author's Response: Students who are 17 aren't allowed to use magic outside of school. Hermione turned 17 in book 6. Just because Unforgiveable Curses aren't allowed doesn't mean people don't use them. Draco used an Unforgiveable on Madam Rosmerta in book 6 as well.
Name: Shattered_Dreams reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Sep 20, 2005 01:40 pm
Aw how cute! That's so sweet whomever did that for her. Great idea. Loving the story still, I'll continue to r&r.
Name: ronlover reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Aug 07, 2005 04:35 pm
I love this story. It is really well written. They are both in character and I love it. Keep up the great work!
Name: Mione23 reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Jul 05, 2005 05:45 pm
AWW!! Who did her detention?? I bet u it WAS Malfoy!! I'm ready for some Draco/Ginny moments! You know what I like about your story. You can tell that its going to be Draco/Ginny and Ron/Hermione. Harry and Hermione stories make me sick. Don't like them. A question are you the same kjcp from checkmated.com??
Author's Response: Hi. Yeah, I'm the same one. I'm going to post the story at CM after HBP comes out with any necessary changes that need to be made (such as, if one of the characters in canon dies that's in my story). So you can look for it there when the queue reopens.
Name: Ginerva reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Jul 03, 2005 03:13 pm
This story is too cute! The chocolate and fire reference was good, i've heard them used seprately but they sound much better togehter! I'm glad you aren't just like "Oh hello mortal enemy let's shag and hide it from the world" like so many others are, this ones seems to be more realistic then others. Great job!
Name: Rae reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Jul 03, 2005 12:15 am
Well written! I like the bit where Ginny starts to cry and Draco has no idea what to do. Heh, heh.
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Jul 02, 2005 09:53 am
this is really good & quite interesting. i can't wait for more updates, and i love the fact that you have long chapters. i'm dying to see what happens with draco & ginny. i really like the fact that it's not "oh we have detention, lets shag" like so many stories are. good job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not a fan of having a D/G relationship move too quickly.
Name: Funnykido reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Jul 02, 2005 07:24 am
Totally agree with Anise. At first, I thought this would be an OOC fluff story, you know? Cute but nothing special. But now, like Anise said, I'm seeing some complexity. The Daphne Greengrass thing (I liked, by the way, how you wrote Draco as still liking Daphne, just not going back to her because of pride, instead of 'losing all sight of other girls because of Ginny' or some rubbish like that), also the death eaters, and Draco's pride. I like it! The characters are well developed, although Snape may be just a BIT over the top. Because I think we have to remember, now that the fifth book is out, and we know he's a member of the order, I imagine him as not being QUITE so evil. But you never know. He was to Harry. But that's just my oppinion. But great job so far!
Author's Response: Ohh, well thank you! I'm trying to have some of Snape's scene be a bit of comic relief (like when he came into the dungeon when Ginny and Draco were doing their detention).
I'm trying really hard not have Draco be out of character. It's hard b/c all we really see of him is being a whinging brat and arrogant. So, trying to give him more depth and not have him be ooc is hard.
I imagine that Draco wouldn't go back to Daphne like you said b/c of pride. He never admitted to her that he fancied her in the first place b/c I think it's important for him not to appear weak.
Keep on the look out, I try to update as frequently as possible.
Name: Anise reviewed
Fire and Chocolate on Jul 02, 2005 07:15 am
I have to say that this fic is really starting to impress me. It seems as if it could turn out to have some real complexity, which is the quality that a lot of D/G fic (unfortunately) is missing. I especially like the way you've resisted the temptation (and it is tempting!) to get Draco and Ginny together too soon. As much as that can be to read, it's just not realistic, given what we know about them from canon. So... I look forward to seeing where this goes!
Author's Response: Aw, wow, thank you! I have an outline, so *I* know where this story is going, lol. I like my fluff and romance, don't get me wrong, but I have a hard time keeping interest in stories that don't have a plot, so I'm trying to add in plot... which there will be more of one later on, so keep on reading.
I don't think that Ginny and Draco would get together right away. They're supposed to hate each other and I don't think they would forget they're on opposite sides of a war so easily.