~So they are going out. Sorta. I really like it.~
~I get confused with some of the dialog, but good plot.~
~Another perfect chapter. I saw some minor spelling mistakes, but i cant complain.~
~HEHE...I just love this story.~
~OMG...I just love this story. I favor Pansy, but I can over look your dramatiaztion of her. lol. Cant wait to read more.~
it was the best fic i've read so far, if i do say so myself.
good show.
=D
oohhh!! this is by far the loveliest draco-ginny story i've read online. thanks heaps!!!
That was so cute and sweet!! Fantastic story. :)
I read some of this on fanfiction.net and I think I forgot about it or got tired of it or something. I don't know. Anyway, I decided to read it again and I fell in love. You have an amazing style. The plot line was great and it had a happy ending (YAY!!!). Good work!!!
awww how cute i absolutely love the whispering in d ear bit. so sexy,so sweet,so charming,so slytherin. very well done story in my opinion, u didn't draw anything out too long, and draco hasn't humanised so much its unbelievable (gotta love d slytherin bad boy). so yeah,again i say good work!
Oooh I was so mad when Draco's daughter came down!! I'm still pissed at him for getting married, even if it was cause she looked like Ginny. Poor Gin. Loved your story and characters!
One flaw that I can see. Students aren't allowed to use magic outside of school, and unforgivable curses are definitely out of the picture, so hermione shouldn't be able to have tested the potion.
Author's Response: Students who are 17 aren't allowed to use magic outside of school. Hermione turned 17 in book 6. Just because Unforgiveable Curses aren't allowed doesn't mean people don't use them. Draco used an Unforgiveable on Madam Rosmerta in book 6 as well.
Loved it. Such a perfect ending, 'cause their ending couldn't be picture-perfect. I think that having Draco have a wife and a daughter really fit. Great work.
Oh, I'm so loving this fic so far. Only a couple of chapters to go! What I really love about your writing is how your grammer is a perfect blend of modern day slang and 'big' words. Realy, this fic is a joy to read.
just two tips: first off, good morning in italian is "buon giorno" -literally, good day- and Glasses as in water, wine glasses is "bicchieri", "vetri" also means glass but it's glass as a material not a particular object ^^. That's just so you know maybe you'll use the info sometime.
Anyway I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!
GOOD LUCK AND KEEP GOING!!!
absolutely brilliant story. i couldn't stop reading it! it drew me in and kept me hostage for a few hours. please keep writing. i am about to go look for your other stories on the other site. thank you for writing a brilliant piece of fiction and incorporating everything so well!
When they first started this, he made her promise that she wouldn't try and change him, but in the end, she hadn't needed to – he changed anyway.
It's almost 5 in the morning now and I have French class in a few hours. But I just had to finish.
Incredible. I completely adore this story, and my mild fondness of Draco and Ginny has now escalated into a full blown devotion to the pairing. Thank you.
the ending was abolutely beautiful..i am crying right now..help me i cant stop crying!!...that was a hell of a emotion ride you took us...loved your story..loved your writing..loved your Ginny..loved your Draco....everything was perfect!!you should get an award or sumthing..there are no words to describe how brilliant captivating your fic was...every word seems to simple...great job!!yay you!!
Oh my flippin' God! That story was so frickin' good. I just want to say that I ended up staying up until 1:30 last night reading this story. The first couple of chapters have some typos/spelling mistakes/grammar mistakes, but other than that I was phenominal. I thoroughly enjoyed and you made me fall in love with Draco all over again. Absolutely amazing story!
Oh wow! Your story was AMAZING!!!!! It took me like 2 days to read it, cause it was so long! I loved it though!!! Your a great writer! I truely enjoyed reading your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was wonderful! A little tidbit... I finished it in four days and yesterday I would have finished it but I got dreadfully sick and the only reason I didn't stay up to read it was because I kept throwing up... Haha, it was great. Drop me a line if you write any other G/D stuff...
Hello!! I was finally able to finish reading the story...I had to stop for a while, life intervened...But I loved this story I thought it was really really good... I liked the ending the most. I was kinda scared finding out tha Draco married another woman. But I understood the whole point in the end. I loved it, and thas all i have to say!! :)
omg, that was such a good story, i'm vry happy w/ the ending, so cute! ~MRG
im glad that you wrote this mistletoe scene as you did. in most fics where they do this, they totally make out and its a little overdone, but this small kiss was good and believable.