Reviews For Ancient Magic
Name: Copper_Penny reviewed Sexy Little Redhead on May 12, 2012 05:07 am
I am very interested in this story. I find it enticing. Please write more. If you don't have a beta, I am free.
Name: celeste1104 reviewed Sexy Little Redhead on Aug 07, 2007 08:05 pm
can't wait for the updates! Thanks for a good read so far!
Name: magiclover reviewed Sexy Little Redhead on Mar 13, 2006 02:51 pm
I love your story!! It's brilliant as far as i'm concerned. Please update!! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Name: johanna reviewed So It Begins on Jul 09, 2005 07:36 am
also, you might want to cut the dialogue down. But other than those two things, I loved it. Verk JKR-esque to start the story off with a Voldemort scene unrelated to the protagonists. Was happily reminded of GoF.

Author's Response: I appreciate the JKR comment!
Name: johanna reviewed So It Begins on Jul 09, 2005 07:33 am
The first sentence is very important, and yours does not read easily. It is nt necessary to have the simile (in fact it doesnt make much sense either), and you want to cut out the "tall grass" part- we already know that a small field has grass in it, and the height of the grass is irrelevant.

Author's Response: I agree with you actually. I have always hated the beginning, I had much of the story writen out but the beginning always eluded me. So I have decided that I am going to do what I have been wanting to do for a long time. I deleted the first part, paraphased it and started from there. Hopefully it will be better!
Name: ronlover reviewed Sexy Little Redhead on Jul 08, 2005 12:19 pm
Thanks for answering my question! It helped. I loved this chapter. I can't wait for chapter 4...should be interesting. Draco and Ginny have to be pared with eachother. Update soon, and keep up the great work.

Author's Response: I really appreciate the support. In chapter 4 Draco is the main character, we find out what he saw in his sixth year. Draco and Ginny will be paired but it will be about Chapter 6. Thank you very much for the review. I really love them!!!
Name: MarisolQ reviewed Sexy Little Redhead on Jul 08, 2005 03:33 am
“Harry, I was mortified and disgusted. I followed my first instinct which was to get myself out of there; I drew my wand and pointed it right at Malfoy’s hateful face as I pulled my arm away from Marius’ grip. That was when Malfoy leaned in close and slowly raised his wand in response with this very evil look in his eyes.” Is the character explaing what went or are you narrating. When Ginny explains the situation it just seems to sensationalized.

Author's Response: I agree that Ginny explaining the situation seems a bit sensationalized, but my beta and myself felt this was the best way. I needed to introduce a new character for this chapter that will show up later. I wanted to show that Ginny has a open mind and considers Slytherins as humans and not monsters. ALthough she might just change her opinion after her Slytherin party night? And lastly, I needed a way to bring Harry and Ginny together. I originally wrote this as Ginny and Harry's flashbacks of that night. My beta's convinced me that this was too confusing and that the best way to explain events was for Ginny to relay the story to Harry. So that is the way we went, and I must admit it is much less confusing. If you have any suggestions, e-mail me. I am always open to suggestions. Thanks for the question and I hope this helps. Most of all thanks for the review.

Author's Response: Okay, This chapter bothered me so much I went back and switched it up again, hopefully for the better!
Name: ronlover reviewed Slytherin Skin on Jul 04, 2005 07:54 am
I like it! Keep up the great work! Update soon.
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