Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
date on Jun 04, 2008 05:50 am
Can't believe that they did that. The little retorts between Ali and Snape was funny. Wondering what their parents are going to say once they find out. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
lips on Jun 04, 2008 05:39 am
OH MY GOD, I hope someone steps out and sees what is going on between Ali and Wolfy. Loving this story more than any other story in the world. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
facts on Jun 04, 2008 05:29 am
Still loving this story, as well as laughing with it. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
like on Jun 04, 2008 05:07 am
Thought that the parts with Ali and Wolfbang were funny. Was nice to read that Draco and Ginny are planning a wedding.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
visitor on Jun 04, 2008 04:10 am
I can tell immediately that you had funny writing this part...
Narcissa was eyeing Alison with distaste. Ginny noticed and gripped Draco's hand tightly.
"She has red hair."
Alison stilled. "I'm also standing right here."
Narcissa looked her up and down. Alison's eyes narrowed a bit.
"I also have freckles and gray eyes. I play seeker, and I can hold my own in muggle fist fight. I like sugar quills, muggle music, snakes for pets, and my favorite color is green. I'd do anything for my mum, and I'm falling in love with my dad. He's cool, you see. My favorite books are 'Catcher in the Rye', 'Green Eggs and Ham', 'Mary Shelley's Frankenstein', and 'Quidditch Through the Ages'."
No one moved.
"You're awfully skinny, aren't you?"
"Look who's talking, twiggy."
The straight, thin line of Narcissa's mouth slowly curved into a smile. Her eyes sparkled. "My, but you are a Malfoy, aren't you."
My favorite part of this is the '"You're awfully skinny, aren't you?"
"Look who's talking, twiggy."'
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Mostly to find out why Cissa was kissing Black.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
release on Jun 04, 2008 03:56 am
This is the BEST DAMN story that I have ever read. It was funny and endearing at the same time. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
family on Jun 04, 2008 03:39 am
Can't believe that a story this good has yet been able to get published for others all around the world to read. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
react on Jun 04, 2008 03:23 am
I LOVE this story. Ron's 'Right next to the big one' line and many others in this chapter had me laughing so hard that I could hardly breathe. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
react on Jun 04, 2008 03:23 am
I LOVE this story. Ron's 'Right next to the big one' line and many others in this chapter had me laughing so hard that I could hardly breathe. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
react on Jun 04, 2008 03:22 am
I LOVE this story. Ron's 'Right next to the big one' line and many others in this chapter had me laughing so hard that I could hardly breathe. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
sought on Jun 04, 2008 03:07 am
I could not stop laughing in this chapter, it was to bloody funny. Excellent work with that. Can't wait to read about Ron's expressions when he finds out.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
creation on Jun 04, 2008 02:49 am
Can now tell that this story will have me laughing in minutes...no, seconds after reading just ONE line. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed
eyes on Jun 04, 2008 02:38 am
Sounds interesting. Also wondering why no one told him that he had a daughter. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
drabble on May 12, 2008 04:11 pm
haha. i love this story! soo cute! i read it all today cuz that's how amazing i am. ;D brilliance!
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed
eyes on Apr 12, 2008 11:24 am
This story is awesome...I totally love Alison and her spunk...she totally takes after both...Her relationship with Wolfie is really cute the love/hate thing...are you gonna end this story like that?I know that you finished it but you're not planning to make a sequel or something???Great job!!
Name: Ginny Rox the Burrow reviewed
eyes on Apr 06, 2008 11:16 am
Hey,just went back to the first chapter and noticed your authors not so I am apologising for my early point out. I hold my hands up and back away slowly cos u seem a bit mad.lol.Sorry.*GRtB*
Name: Ginny Rox the Burrow reviewed
visitor on Apr 06, 2008 08:08 am
First,I love the humour in this story. Ali is particularly awesome!! But dude!!! Narcissa Malfoy and Sirius Black are cousins. First Counsins!!!Thats wrong!!!lol.I hope it's just a big fat thankyou.With no tongue!!!lol.*GRtB*
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
visitor on Feb 23, 2008 10:53 pm
Oh boy. Obviously this was written a REALLY long time ago if Narcissa's snogging Sirius and Arabella Figg is a youngish woman. Heh.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
release on Feb 23, 2008 10:46 pm
Hee hee. I love Alison.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
eyes on Feb 23, 2008 10:07 pm
Ooooo; this looks like fun!
Name: Pepa reviewed
drabble on Dec 30, 2007 08:52 am
I LOVED it! It is SO one of my favorite stories ever! I must edmit; I have a problem, I stay up ALL night reading stories (So you can guess that i have read a LOT!) And this is easily one of my favorites!! I LOVED IT! Great job! You have a great talent! Please, keep it up! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
drabble on Nov 22, 2007 05:11 pm
hahaha! this was great! i loved it! i'm pretty sure i've read it before but its just as good the second time! ahahha.
Name: DrillSargent reviewed
visitor on Nov 10, 2007 03:29 pm
v. confused
Narcissa and Sirius are cousins though
Author's Response: You know those author's notes aren't just at the beginning of the story to look cute.
Name: Meakame reviewed
heart on Nov 10, 2007 05:33 am
This was a really good fic and I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks!
Hahaha it took me a while to realise that Narcissa and Sirius were cousins, but as your author's note says, this was written before ootp :) so no incest.
Again I say, great job!
Name: aimslee reviewed
like on Nov 05, 2007 12:52 am
hey umm u do realise that narcissa n sirius r like related
major insest there
but other than that
its good
Author's Response: Did you not even read the author's note on the first chapter (eyes)? Because it clearly states right there that the fic was written BEFORE Order of the Phoenix when I didn't know Sirius and Narcissa were cousins. Yes I friggin' realize they're related... NOW. But how could I have known that back then?