I thought it was a lovely story and thoroughly enjoyed it. I did get a little confused during the parts in The Three Broomsticks as it skipped back and forth and I wasn't sure when what had been said. Although, other than that I loved it. :)
I thought it was a lovely story and thorougly enjoyed it. I did get a little confused during the parts in The Three Broomsticks as it skipped back and forth and I wasn't sure when what had been said. Although, other than that I loved it. :)
good so far, just one complaint: malfoy would never wear a rolex, that is a muggle accessory. his family and him hates muggles!
why hasn't ron come to visit her if he was so worried?
ok i misread the 1st chapter, oopsie harry was playing. love is in the air already. that stick comment was pretty funny.
ok just started the story, i am assuming this is 5th year for draco and harry, ginny's 4th year when she played seeker after harry got the lifetime ban from umbridge, right?
You put heaps of effort into the begining of the fanfic and I really enjoyed it, but then you seemed to get bored with writing it and the end was just really lame and so now I kinda feel like I wasted my time reading it although I cant tell you can write. The end of a story is supposed to give the reader closure, and all I got from that was a feeling like you just wanted to stop writing it. 2/10
ohmygod i loved it! im REALLY picky, and hardly ever read a longer story the whole way through, but you hooked me! Keep up everything you're doing, its excellent. i cant wait for the sequel!
I love this story! Was it Draco? It has to be. Can there be a sequal once the next chapter is posted. Update soon. Cant wait for more. :)
Author's Response: I am definately doing a sequel to this story, already have it all planned out, but I've already started a second fic that is Draco/Ginny but has no ties to this one. I know that it's different and so it'll probably be less liked but I also definately have to write it cause it's been in my head for weeks, developing on it's own and I have to write it...I can be like Weezer (the band) and my second story can be like their sophmore CD Pinkerton which totally turns it's back on the blue album...then I'll write the sequel which can be like the green album...yeah I'm PRETTY good at analogies that make a lot of sense. I still wish I was Weezer. Err...sorry...I definately went off track, but there IS a sequel in the making.
Love it! OMG!! It cant work on Draco! lol.
Author's Response: It's all in the last chapter which will hopefully be out today. I heard that the last chapter in this story is kinda well......oh yeah I'm not supposed to say anything. I just hope you enjoy it, it's definately in the last chapter. Thanks again!
I love it! I love Ron, but he can be so funny! lol
Author's Response: Ron is definately one of my favorite characters, I wish that JK Rowlings wrote a book from Ron's perspective, so we could get inside his mind, and see the world from his eyes, of course he's so easy to read as it is, wearing his heart on his sleeve so to speak. I let Ron be the comic relief in this story...not that anything I've had him say has been particularly funny but that's just me failing at humour....anyway thanks a ton Ronlover!
Aaaah...story so good...*dies waiting for last chapter* No, but seriously, I really like your story. It has flavor and it doesn't just start out with them having this whole ive always loved him and her but i never told anyone thing going like so many do. I really like how you work into it and actually use the charecters as they are in the books. :) Good job and I can't wait till this story is done and to read your next one!
Author's Response: I hope the last chapter will be up today...I'm so delighted that you like my story....as for the "I've secretly loved Ginny weasley forever" thing, I think the best parts are writing about how they hate each other in the beginning. The dialogue can get totally outrageous but still be believable...I'm so happy you reviewed, it makes my day! I hope the final chapter is satisfactory...a lot of people haven't liked it but it's honestly gonna have a sequel (beginning of Sequel's summary is in the last chapter)....
Great chapter!! I loved Draco's thoughts about Ginny, and the way he dreaded what he was about to do. I also really liked Ginny's feelings as an outsider in her own family; with her pressing, very private concerns, I thought it was very appropriate. I also liked Mathilda Malfoy, and wouldn't have minded seeing more of her. I'm so sorry that there are no more chapters posted...I'm a very impatient reader. Post soon!
Author's Response: Opps..I forgot to post the last chapter...*falls down from embarassment* I'll post it right now hope it gets up soon. I'll probably put Mathilda in the sequel. The crazy old grandmother....like that one in Wedding Crashers...if anyones seen that...well she won't go insulting FDR's wife though......thanks for the enthusiastic review. I felt that Ginny should honestly feel different from her family because ...well as you pointed it out, she had a lot of thinking to do. As for Draco I've been trying to get him to show a little bit of emotion but I don't want him to like become totally emotional and whatnot so I guess I've been trying to balance it, the thin line etc. I hope I haven't gone overboard. Thanks again fro the review! It honestly makes my day
This chapter was rather hard to follow...I liked it, of course, as I liked all your chapters, because Draco and Ginny are such honest characters. But I don't really understand how everything went chronologically, here--when did Draco leave Ginny alone? When did he say the bit about her leaving him alone? It was rather confusing. I'm worried about Ginny using a Love Potion, too...it's just so wrong, of course, even with that last disclaimer of the saleswitch. Hm; guess we'll see.
Author's Response: Oh dear....the thing about Draco leaving Ginny alone was right after "What did he possess which was worthy of Ginny? As he looked at her he realized the answer- nothing." Then he's like "K I gotta leave." But I decided rather than having him say that and having her repeat it in her thoughts I'd just jump to her thoughts. I see now that that was probably really confusing. I'll add an explanation before the next chapter.
Boy! Nice, captivating beginning--I know that Draco has to catch Ginny, because where would the fic go if he didn't, but I'm still screaming at him to go, go, go!!
Author's Response: Heh heh....don't worry...I do that all the time in movies/books/TV shows...most embarassing = when it's a rerun I've already seen. But I'm so flattered that you think my story is worthy of such...well it's not suspense is it? Anyway thanks a ton!
"As a little kid, after my dad beat me, I’d search for that constellation." Just jump right in and say it, eh?
Author's Response: errr....yeah I kinda found it best to be blunt.....thanks for reviewing.
She needs his assistance like she needs another bludger to the head! Can he drop her one more time? Cute chapter.
Author's Response: Haha....thanks so much. I really enjoyed your analogies. Thanks for the support!
Bickering. Bickering. Draco's comments about Hermione were hysterical! For the record, I don't think your chapters are too short. Stories sometimes just break down that way.
Author's Response: Thank you I try and attempt to find logical breaking points in my stories and often that means that they become shortened as a result.
Wonderful. I love the end where he tucks her hair behind her ear. I think our Slytherin is smitten!
Author's Response: Yes...that was probably a little soon but I couldn't help sneaking it in there. It seemed really cute. I'm so glad you enjoyed that snippet of the story.
Classic start to a Quidditch story. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Actually strangely enough, Quidditch won't come up to much after this. I probably should have made it more of a focus in the story, looking back, but I guess that's why we live and learn. Anyway thank you so much for reviewing more than once!
awwww another sweet chapter but i think that perhaps they r a bit 2 short... it wud b nice if they were longer :D
Author's Response: I know what you mean. I'm done this story now so all i have to do is upload it, but in my next story I promise it'll be longer.
awwww that was really sweet... i lyk ur style ov writing 2 altho i dnt reli think u had 2 write about the italics b4 u started ppl wud ave known lol nt that im avin a go, jst sayin... bout 2 read nxt chapter :D
Author's Response: You're right of couse...it probably was a nobrainer really. I hope you enjoy the rest of my story. Thanks for reviewing!
I really like this story. Keep up the great work! Update soon. The chapter was not boring.
Author's Response: I'm delighted that you think so...incidentally, Ron (as you seem to be a fan) has more of a prescence in the later chapters. Thanks again for reviewing!
yummy love ur story its like food
Author's Response: Wow...thanks that's really sweet. I totally understand what you mean by that but I never thought anyone would say that about my writing. Thanks a million!
One quick little error fix...Artemis is a female God, so I would assume that you wouldn't name a boy owl Artemis. With that in mind, you have Artemis as a girl in the last chapter and as a boy in this chapter. Otherwise, I love it. I most especially love that someone else adores writing short chapters the way I do!
Author's Response: Oh I knew that but I named Artemis after the guy from Artemis Fowl. Thanks anyway, yes I have a tendency to write short chapters. It's somethign that I seem unable to resist.