Reviews For Unbidden Desires
Name: CaesiiOculi reviewed Spirits Having Flown on Jun 07, 2005 08:45 am
I've always had a sneaking suspicion that Mrs. Norris was a animagus that got stuck in animal form... I liked the way you wove the story around it... Let's just hope J.K. thinks along the same lines!
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Interhouse Cooperation Week on Jun 02, 2005 10:17 pm
FANTASTIC!! I didn't realize that you were going to write an epilogue to the story but I was very happy that you did. I enjoyed Filtch using his powers once again, though I think I would have prefered the part with Draco and Ginny to be at the end. I would have kept the main characters more fresh in your mind. The entire story was amazing! You should be very proud of yourself. Congrats on finishing your first full length novel. I for one would LOVE a sequel I live for prequels and sequels. I hope you do write one, not just because I would love to see what happens but also beacause a talent like yours shouldn't be left to sit on a shelf if you know what I mean. .....Kristine

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words - that means a lot to me! :D Check my LJ for links to my other works. Yes, I thought about putting a D/G scene at the very end, but I opted not to. My goals were to keep it real, to write everyone in-character, and to avoid doing things that people expected. I really wanted the ending to be memorable, not just have the happy couple "riding off into the sunset"...so I put their mini 'love scene' at the top. And it does leave room for a sequel and even a prequel or two, so don't worry - I'll be back...! ;)
Name: jamie reviewed Interhouse Cooperation Week on Jun 02, 2005 02:23 pm
great chapter, i really enjoyed this story and the ending was excellent just like the rest of the story. you did a terrific job and i am sure that i will read this story over again. And I hope that you do decide to do a sequel because that would be so terrific. Again Excellent job well done:)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I enjoyed writing it. I hope to continue in this "universe" as time permits.
Name: Embellished reviewed Interhouse Cooperation Week on Jun 02, 2005 09:18 am
Thank you for your story. I have enjoyed it very much! Whether you write a sequel or something else next, I will look forward to it. You seem to have lots of good ideas!
Name: aquarius21 reviewed Secrets and Lies on Jun 02, 2005 08:44 am
24 chapters and only 3 reviews? It's a very good story. I like it.
Name: Nival Vixen reviewed Turn the Page on May 31, 2005 02:57 am
Please update soon! is the war going to end now with lucius dead? Or is it going to continue through Voldemort alone, since Bellatrix is Azkaban? Kreacher liking Bellatrix was kind of weird... But it was a good idea! :-) Please update soon!!!! Nival Vixen ~NV me
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Turn the Page on May 13, 2005 04:03 am
I had not read this story prior to yesterday. Read the whole thing and I thought is was fabulous. I don't know where you get the inspiration. I only hope you keep it up...keep the story coming.
Name: GlassBroomstick reviewed What I Am on Apr 09, 2005 05:15 am
Wonderful story. Probably one of the best ones I've ever read on this site. Update soon please!
Name: beckysue2 reviewed What I Am on Apr 01, 2005 04:22 am
This is really a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next! By the way, are you from Michigan? I grew up there. My kids will be thrilled that I finally finished reading what you have so far. It's been 2 loooong days. hehe

Author's Response: Great! I hope it won't take me too long to end the suspense and post a new chapter, but tax time is upon us...so RL (aka real life) may call me away. (sigh!) No, I'm not from Michigan. My dad was Air Force, and we lived almost everywhere, but not there.
Name: Embellished reviewed What I Am on Mar 31, 2005 05:08 pm
This is quite an interesting chapter. Lots of new info. I particularly liked the little incident with Flitwick!

Author's Response: Good - I thought the bit with Flitwick falling down was kind of funny. I kept giggling as I was writing it, but I hoped someone else would be amused, too. I mean, Flitwick cursing, in that squeaky little voice of his? How silly is that? :p Hey, thanks for the review!
Name: mary reviewed What I Am on Mar 31, 2005 03:00 pm
interesting stuff! im curious of how draco is gonna apologise to ginny and blaise. keep up the great fic!

Author's Response: Yes, he really should, shouldn't he? But then, he is a Slytherin *and* a Malfoy...so do you think he really will? :D (Thanks!)
Name: bellasol67 reviewed What I Am on Mar 31, 2005 06:16 am
It was nice to see an update! Finally! Kreacher does something good!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know this chapter was slow in coming, but I had a lot of things to work out in it. :)
Name: mereschino reviewed Casa sporca, gente aspetta on Feb 02, 2005 01:19 pm
before reading the note at the end, i was going to include this review: caught the nod to Austen. Very original detentionees.
Name: dragonfly reviewed Wish You Were Here on Jan 05, 2005 07:29 pm
I just read your fic and i truly hope you continue to write. That was awesome for a first attempt. The writing and dialogue just kept getting better. And you have a plot!!! Keep up the good work.
Name: Draco Luva reviewed Wish You Were Here on Dec 31, 2004 11:35 am
Yay this chapter was so great! keep updating, i love this story!
Name: sionnain reviewed Secrets and Lies on Dec 20, 2004 10:29 am
This is such great writing!!! I love it!!
Name: Sionnain reviewed I Scheme, Therefore I Am on Dec 20, 2004 10:04 am
Oh wow, this is really good! I just stumbled onto this fic, and am now settling down to read it all :)
Name: Sweet_rain reviewed Blaise's Super Hero Girl on Dec 15, 2004 08:42 am
For a beginner, I think your fic is quite good. I like reading stories of Draco and Ginny but it is better if they are in character even the golden Trio. You were able to put them In character from the book. I hope you understand what I mean. Good job though.,
Name: JJJ reviewed Clarity on Nov 19, 2004 04:03 am
i LIKE IT, THOUGH dRACO SEEMS OUT OF CHARACTER AT TIMES. HOWEVER; ITS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ HERE. kEEP IT UP! OH AND WUT EVER HAPPEND WITH PANSY AND NEVIEL?

Author's Response: Hmm, we may see them again . . . Thanks for the review!
Name: mary reviewed Clarity on Nov 16, 2004 05:44 pm
this isan amazing fic, i havent read a fic this realistic and cannonish in a long time. i luv how ginny and draco are potrayed, the plot is very interesting. please write more soon!
Name: mary reviewed Keeping Up Appearances on Nov 15, 2004 06:47 pm
very interesting fic, its been keeping me on the edge of my seat.
Name: mary reviewed I Scheme, Therefore I Am on Nov 14, 2004 05:26 pm
haha, i loved the part where draco was wondering why harry is allowed to go to hoggwarts, i wondered that too after book 3.
Name: nani51 reviewed Yearning on Nov 13, 2004 06:03 pm
did the sophia girl almost say gracias? i thought she was italian?

Author's Response: She is Italian. One translation site I went to spelled it "graci", but I've also seen it spelled "grazzi" (I don't know Italian; is one 'more correct' than the other?)
Name: Jezawin reviewed I Scheme, Therefore I Am on Nov 13, 2004 01:25 pm
Hee... I've haven't even started reading yet but damn I really like your disclaimer. Stupid Bad tires.
Name: Lindsay reviewed Bring Me to Life on Oct 10, 2004 10:29 pm
Awesome fic so far!! I finished all the chapters today. I'm thoroughly impressed. You're a fantastic writer, who keeps readers *me atleast* on the edge of their seats writhing in anticipation. Keep up the good work, and I look for more updates in the future! =)
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