Name: Shwadi reviewed
Screams and Dreams on May 18, 2007 11:51 am
i really like it please continue it. its a great read thanx xxxxxxxx
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Screams and Dreams on Mar 09, 2007 05:51 pm
great story! update soon!
Name: Nola Ryan reviewed
Screams and Dreams on Mar 07, 2007 02:40 pm
Author's Comments: Thanks for the feedback about them not sounding their age. I'm working on different sections of this story at the same time (yes, the story will go well into the future), so I'll have to be more careful about making sure they're acting the way they should at this point in the story. I'll listen closely to the 12 year old I live with to keep on track with that.
As for sexual tension between Ginny and Snape -- that was not at all my intention, I just think he makes an interesting foil for her, because everyone else seems to fear the darkness that surrounds him but Ginny is comfortable with it because of her experience with Tom.
Glad you're enjoying seeing the twins -- I love them and love writing for them, so expect to see much more of them!
Thank you to all of you for the reviews, they're greatly appreciated! -- Nola
Name: imelda reviewed
Screams and Dreams on Mar 07, 2007 06:54 am
Oh! I'm sorry to have reached the end of what's posted. I have definitely been enjoying this story. Although I am a bit surprised you're situating the whole thing in 2nd year. Draco and Ginny are acting much more mature than an 11 and 12 year old, so I think the story you're writing is a bit too old for them. Obviously, though, I guess canon forces you to keep them at that age.
I love Ginny and Draco's interaction, and I'm interested to see how their relationship develops. It's also fun and yet scary to see Tom sticking around in Ginny's head, sometimes talking to her.
Ginny, when she's being cruel, is kind of annoying, though. I like seeing her a bit darker, and also find it interesting watching her struggle with Tom. But her outright b*tchiness is just hard to believe at times. It's too much unlike her. And it's too teen-angsty.
Oh, and if she IS 11 years old, you've really got to tone down the sexual tension with Snape. I keep enjoying it, and then remembering that she's 11, not 16, and being majorly squicked.
I hope you continue this! I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews, but I'm sure they will come. Happy writing!