Ana reviewed Serpent Ferret & the Baby Weasel
on Oct 14, 2005 05:05 pm
I remember having to do a project like this in English class last year. I didn't exactly enjoy the assignment because I'm horrible at poetry, but I liked yours. I loved the words you used and I got a good laugh out of your limmerick.
Author's Response: Thank you heaps Ana. People always tell me I have an expansive vocabulary, and I'm glad someone got a laugh from my playing on words. :)
Myanceris reviewed Serpent Ferret & the Baby Weasel
on Sep 29, 2005 08:42 am
Nicely written. I'm not a fan of cinquains myself but English class is english class. LOL Out of curiosity, what WAS the shape of the shape poem?
I liked the last one too - nice dark overtones.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Myanceris! The shape was a figure eight 8, symbolising both eternity and that Ginny and Draco are joined in the middle, even though the line (representing their families) curves away from each other. I hope I explained it so its understandable, but it's quite complex and thanks for your comments!!!!
secretkeeper reviewed Serpent Ferret & the Baby Weasel
on Sep 28, 2005 03:40 pm
Nice poetry but your a bit on the dramatic side.. anyway still a good poem page.
Author's Response: Haha very funny JESS. To all of you who have no idea what I'm doing, Jess (aka secretkeeper) is my real life best friend and decided she MUST leave me some feedback even though she proof-read my poems in our English class. Anyone other than Jess, please feel free to leave your comments and constuctive critisism.