Name: Desertisle reviewed
Prologue on Apr 07, 2017 04:29 pm
Such a great story but how I wish it was completed in '04/'05. It would have been fun to see how the story ended and of course to read any possible outcomes the writer had premonition to in regards to the forthcoming books at that time.
Name: gemini reviewed
Atlantis or Bust on Mar 15, 2008 08:50 pm
hello! i have really enjoyed this story so far and i hope that you continue it!! I want to see hwat happens next between draco and ginny and if the find bill in time. great job!! let me know! silverdragon20021@yahoo.com
Name: Hopeless reviewed
The Staff of Lamaštu on Aug 07, 2007 05:31 pm
oh, i do believe that this is getting quite interesting............
by the way, great plotline
Name: ruthyjuicy1@yahoo.com reviewed
Prologue on May 25, 2006 08:50 am
I love this story! I can totally tell where Elizabeth Lowell comes in! Have you read any of the other books in that series? (Jade Island, etc) They're all sooo good! I can't wait to read the next installment!
Name: ruthyjuicy1@yahoo.com reviewed
Prologue on May 25, 2006 08:49 am
I love this story! I can totally tell where Elizabeth Lowell comes in! Have you read any of the other books in that series? (Jade Island, etc) They're all sooo good! I can't wait to read the next installment!
Name: Santiago reviewed
Prologue on Jun 23, 2005 11:36 am
Wow. This story is so extremely awesome. I love the plot, and the action & adventure is such a welcome change from most other D/G fics. I think this is brilliant and I'd love to find out what happens next in D & G's quest to save Bill! Good luck and update soon!
Name: ScarletAngel reviewed
Atlantis or Bust on Jan 01, 2005 09:01 am
I just realized that I haven't reviewed this. I feel awful. This has been on my favorites list since summer! And it hasn't been updated since...*checks*...July?!
It's so good! How dare you leave us hanging like this! *shakes fist weakly* This is extremely unfair. Lasso whatever muses have run away from you and stick them right back into your brain where they belong. Do you at least have well...some idea? When it's going to be updated, I mean.
*faints from story deprivation*
I'm sorry, I've been complaining this whole review. Here is my praise, so bursting with admiration that I'm forced to write in netspeak:
[OMGWTFBBQUROX!!11!!TiSfIcRuLz!!LOLroflmao!1]
^_^ Update soon, please!
Name: wendymoiraweasley reviewed
Demons At Large on Jul 14, 2004 12:42 am
oooh! updated! i read the last three chapters all at once. it's still great. i got caught up in the story, i wasn't looking out for rogue commas.... heheheh. :D
Name: Drago Del Fuoco reviewed
Demons At Large on Jul 06, 2004 07:27 am
I love this story. It's very interesting, and I love how you are useing Atlantis. It's also really sweet.
Name: Drago Del Fuoco reviewed
The Demoness Lamaštu on Jul 01, 2004 06:13 pm
I love your story. It has an interesting theme/idea, and I love the way you are connecting Atlantis with mesopotamia. It must of taken lots of research.
Name: Qiana A. Storm reviewed
The Demoness Lamaštu on Jun 27, 2004 02:45 am
really brilliant research put into this story. i really like the d/g and the plot is great. not too overdone, just right. mlafoy could have been characterised a bit better, he's a bit of a weak version of the lovable cynical sarcastic evil malfoy we love, but hey i'm a sucker for pansies. no seriously i love them. thanks for this, i'll be sure to keep up with it.
Name: wendymoiraweasley reviewed
The Demoness Lamaštu on Jun 21, 2004 10:59 pm
Well, I read all posted chapters in one day, and I must say... it was time well spent. :) My interest was immediately piqued because this story featured Bill also, my other favorite Weasley. Pretty good work, especially on the archeology bits, I think you've managed to research all this really well (like D and G in the story. heeeheee). Though the chapters are too short, they're really very good, and your story is well-written. I'm actually not a D/G shipper myself, but I do have fun reading a lot of D/G stuff, and I loved your story very much. Good job, and I can't wait for the next installments. :)
Name: Firei reviewed
The Demoness Lamaštu on Jun 16, 2004 01:53 pm
Poor William...^.^ Great story, though!
Name: jane_valar reviewed
The Curse-breaker's Sister on Jun 15, 2004 10:42 am
I'm sorry I haven't stumbled upon this before because it's quite good and very well written. I find it to be quite orginial and highly intriguing, I'd like to finish reading the chapters you'ver written and write more comments but I have to flee. I just wanted to tell you, that you have a wonderful story on your hands.
-JV
Name: Sue Bridehead reviewed
The Curse-breaker on Jun 15, 2004 08:14 am
I really liked this chapter. It felt more solid, like it knew where it was going. (It's so hard getting a new fic off the ground, isn't it?) This story is certainly getting interesting!
Name: StrangerWithMyFace reviewed
The Staff of Lamaštu on Jun 12, 2004 03:25 pm
I was recommended this fic by Mynuet in the draco_and_ginny livejournal community. It's a very interesting and original fic. Sometimes when reading stories within the same pairing they all sort of blend together but yours definately sticks out. I'm intrigued and anxious to see more. I'd also like to say that I like your writing style. It's descriptive but not overly descriptive. It flows nicely and is easy to read. (The only thing I'd like to see is more of a warning when you're switching perspective, maybe a hard return or an astrisk. But that's certainly not a major thing and you make it clear enough who is speaking all the time so it's not too confusing.) Anyway, it's a wonderful start. You blended your own character in well. I mean sometimes original characters don't work in the HP universe and yours seems to. I'm glad he's holidaying in HP land. :) I hope to read more in the future.
Author's Response: I just wanted to say thanks for your review! It made my day.
I am still struggling with point of view changes. I sometimes assume that if I know who we are reading about and hearing from, then everybody else does as well. Kind of cheeky of me, I will admit:)
I used to use an astrisk, but was told not to? (Crazy, I know, JKR uses them, why can't I!) and to use a hard return. I promise I've come a long way with that, though. The POV used to change randomly, often in wonky directions and the poor reader was left clueless as to who was saying what and what was going on!
Anyway, that was just a lot of words to say "thanks" and I'm glad you enjoyed it.