Name: rowan_greenleaf reviewed Malfoy vs. Finnigan on Nov 02, 2008 06:44 pm

Your writing is good, and I like the fact that you've taken care to build the plot before jumping in with the D/G. Your descriptions are excellent. You really get the sense that Draco is miserable about his situation, but unable to change it. I liked your description of Ginny. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually have a beta that helps me with my story only because sometimes I tend to drag things out...it's nice to read a review from someone who doesn't seem to mind waiting...it's a long story, I've only started up again in posting it on this site. :)

Name: AvidAuror_DM reviewed The Morning After the Dream on Nov 19, 2005 12:24 pm

That was a very well written piece. Somehow, your words made DM seem alive, a person to be pitied despite his allegiances. One wonders what his father's eyes reveal to him that make DM so upset and scared. Even his emotions are perfect. I have always felt that Draco does not feel emotions as openly as people express. His fears and motivations are deep beneath the surface, but not soo deep that you cannot feel them. Its like he represses it, but its struggling to come out. Unfortunately his upbringing demands a stoic nature. Love will change that somewhat as he will trust that someone (Ginny in this case...love this ship) and make him express himself more freely and enable him to show his love and hatred, anger and fustration and loneliness of his life and predicament. I sincerely hope that you will update more. Seriously! You are just pulling me in: gently but surely pulling me along. UPDATE SOON! PLZ!PLZ!