Name: rowan_greenleaf reviewed Malfoy vs. Finnigan on Nov 02, 2008 06:44 pm

Your writing is good, and I like the fact that you've taken care to build the plot before jumping in with the D/G. Your descriptions are excellent. You really get the sense that Draco is miserable about his situation, but unable to change it. I liked your description of Ginny. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually have a beta that helps me with my story only because sometimes I tend to drag things out...it's nice to read a review from someone who doesn't seem to mind waiting...it's a long story, I've only started up again in posting it on this site. :)