Name: Akire reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 11, 2006 02:17 am
OHHHHHH! Poor Ginny, her family seems like such a pain. Draco should really just break it off with Dakotah, i really dont like her cuz she seems like a backstabber, she should fall down a flight of stairs, jk lol. Good job cant wait for the next chapter!!
Name: passion reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 10, 2006 11:56 pm
and the brilliant chapters just keep coming...a delicious treat this was...
Name: Sophinna reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 10, 2006 10:43 pm
Yay, they kissed at last! I really love your descriptions, and this is a beautifully written, fantastically emotional story. It's amazing, love it!
Author's Response: "...this is a beautifully written, fantastically emotional story..."
Why thank you! That's one of the highest compliments I've been paid! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Name: Marcia reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 10, 2006 10:23 pm
I've read this chapter before. Is the story posted somewhere else?
Author's Response: Yep! It's posted fully at Checkmated under the (author) name TearfulMoon.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 10, 2006 05:25 pm
Hmm. Interesting developments. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. Thanks for the update!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter 5 on Mar 08, 2006 08:15 am
I can't believe the nerve of Ron to treat Ginny the way he did! It's not brotherly at all!
But when Ginny spit in Malfoy's face that was awesome!
I didn't like it at first, but then I finished the chapter and it was hilarious!
Update soon!
Author's Response: I am really glad to know that you like my little story! I know it is slow going - too slow for some people - but I feel it's at the right pace. And it picks up when it needs to. Thank you for your awesome reviews!
Ps. From what I remember, I did try to inject a little bit of humor into chapter 5. I plan on updating within the next couple of days. :D
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter 2 on Mar 08, 2006 08:05 am
Hm,.. did Les' sweating have anything to do with the thing that happens later? During Draco and Ginny's trip? The thing they came back from it for?
(I didn't want to give anything away ^_^)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 08, 2006 08:01 am
I've been going back to the stories I've reviewed to see if the author left any comments on my reviews and I was astonished to see that I hadn't reviewed your first couple of chapters!
I absolutely love this story.
Although I have to say that after reading as far as I did that I like Dakotah this way better than later on. ^_^ keep writing!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 8 on Mar 07, 2006 02:00 am
First, before I forget, the spelling is not "per say," it is "per se" with a stress above the letter e in "se." There are a few teensy tiny little spelling and grammatical errors, but those happen to even the best of us...so there is really no problem there.
Other than those things, it was a brilliant chapter. I swear, if I were Ginny, I'd bring it Draco's attention that he cared far too much of what I(she) thought of him and what he was doing with Dakotah. When a boy cares if you give a damn, that is a dead give away that he cares (often more than he's willing to admit).
Author's Response: LOL Thank you for all of your reviews! They all made my day! :D
I'm glad you like this story. I've had a lot of fun writing it and its good to know others are enjoying it. It definitely makes the effort worthwhile. :D
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 7 on Mar 07, 2006 01:14 am
That always happens during the most delicious dreams. Grr.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 6 on Mar 07, 2006 01:05 am
Ah ha! I remember now! This is getting good!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 5 on Mar 07, 2006 01:02 am
How many of these chapters have I already read? Lol. Some parts of them seem so familiar, but others are completely foreign to me. If I've already reviewed and left proof of prior reading, please forgive me...I read far too much fanfiction. *blushes*
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 4 on Mar 07, 2006 12:58 am
You know, I love the way Molly comforts Ginny. I always wished I could go to my own Mother to seek comfort like that. I'm not in any way insulting her parenting skills because she was a wonderful Mother, but just wish I had received more of that kind of affection at home. I think, especially in our generation, parents don't do stuff like that often enough. We always had to go to our friends for comfort like that. I think that once this generation grows up and has kids that people will be a lot more affectionate...because we know what we wish our parents would have done and feel the need to improve on it in some way.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 3 on Mar 07, 2006 12:49 am
You know, I sometimes prefer it when authors kill Harry off rather than have him be neglectful or a rat bastard. You just have to go with what the story needs. Sometimes authors do it, sometimes they don't. You did, and the story is better for it. Really nice chapter, I'm off to read the next one!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 2 on Mar 07, 2006 12:42 am
See, I had previously reviewed this chapter...I wonder why I hadn't reviewed the previous two chapters. Grr. Well, this a wonderful chapter with great foreshadowing...if this weren't a Draco/Ginny archive, I'd really be scratching my head about who her new partner would be!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 07, 2006 12:41 am
I really could swear that I'd reviewed this chapter. I know I've read it previous to this and I'm so sorry for not reviewing at that point!
I will say that my favorite part of the whole thing is that you haven't make Dakotah the metaphorical thorn in Ginny's side. It seemas though too often there are only two females in any given story (or movie or whatever) and they are automatically arch enemies. I like it that you've made them friends and that you've made Dakotah be a little forceful with the friendship. It's good. I'm off to reread the next chapter.
Name: hallee87 reviewed
Chapter 8 on Mar 03, 2006 08:22 pm
ooh, interesting. great chapter! please continue very soon!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Prologue on Mar 03, 2006 09:59 am
I really thought I had reviewed this previously, but I guess not! I'm so sorry!
I cried! Oh how I cried! Such a good, tear-jerking chap! I'm off to read the next!
Name: Sophinna reviewed
Chapter 8 on Mar 03, 2006 02:03 am
Oooooooooooh, nasty! Please, please, please carry this on, it is FANTASTIC and I love it!
Name: Sophinna reviewed
Chapter 6 on Mar 03, 2006 12:35 am
Wow, amazing chapter... This is really getting DARK!
Name: Sophinna reviewed
Chapter 5 on Mar 03, 2006 12:25 am
HAHAHAHA! Go Ginny! Sorry I didn't review for the last few chapters... I love Molly Weasley, so kind.
Name: Sophinna reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 02, 2006 11:57 pm
Aaaaah! Love Dakotah by the way.
Name: Sophinna reviewed
Prologue on Mar 02, 2006 11:50 pm
*Sniff* So lovely, so beautifully written. I really like this. I also love Ron's very 'English' langauge at the beginning!
Name: passion reviewed
Chapter 8 on Mar 02, 2006 12:17 am
woah!! a twist...not lookin good for Draco...and i knew it!! i never did like that Dakotah tart...and i cant believe Draco gave in...Malfoys never gives in!! great chapter...the story is gettin interseting..and better..cant wait for the next update..love your work!!
Name: LenaNectaris reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 23, 2006 04:36 pm
'Later on she would come to wonder why, she was somehow Malfoy was in it.' This sentence doesn't make any sense.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. It's supposed to read, 'Later on she would come to wonder why but she wasn't bothered by Malfoy in it.' How's that?