Reviews For A Role To Play
Name: shadieladie reviewed CHAPTER FOUR - The Beginning? on Jan 28, 2006 02:13 pm
oh i lover her i just love her.


Author's Response: Me too... oh wait - who are we talking about? I love Ginny too. I'm glad you like her how I write her! ;)
Name: Embellished reviewed CHAPTER SIX - A Family's Support on Jan 28, 2006 01:01 pm
I really enjoyed the chapters that got posted today. I'm happy that Draco and Ginny finally figured out each others' identities. And I especially liked Arthur's response. :)

Author's Response: Isn't Arthur brilliant? I love him too! I'm glad you liked these chapters. Thank you for the review!
Name: shadieladie reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 28, 2006 11:48 am
i love it


Author's Response: YAY! Thanks!
Name: Kisou reviewed CHAPTER THREE - Correspondence on Jan 25, 2006 09:40 pm
It's been a while since you've updated. Please do. I really like the plot so far. It's original, and you really shouldn't let it go to waste by forgetting about it.

I don't really have any big criticisms. Nothing really stood out as annoying or confusing. I would like to say that, though I understood it, and I'm sure everyone else figured it out too, the following passage was rather confusing.


" She'd made him laugh out loud the day she told him about making her brother break out in green spots all over his body after he refused to stop badgering her about her nonexistent boyfriends. He was always bugging her about it, and it was ‘obvious’ he had a friend he wanted her to date, but she told Draco that she just wasn’t interested in ‘him’ anymore. She loved making her brother suffer. It was ‘mad fun!’"


Though using the little quotes from Ginny's letters is a great part of your voice, you want to make sure that you don't use too many of them so close together, or it can be a little distracting from what you're really trying to say. In that particular instance, you were trying to get across the kind of relationship they had, and so it wasn't a problem. I just want you to know that in another place, that could be.

Good job, and for god's sake, update.


Author's Response: Thanks... for the review and the constructive criticism. I haven't forgotten the story, in fact, the whole thing is already written, it's just not typed and beta'd yet. I do post it over at ff.net unbeta'd for the girls on my LJ that just can't wait for it to get here... but currently I have been lying in wait for more updates from Anise (her new story is brilliant) and having massive morning sickness... but I promise there will be more here soon! ;) (I think it is 3 more chapters... and never fear about usuing too much of Ginny's letters... In the next chapters there won't be any (not to ruin it for you or anything! ;) )
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed CHAPTER THREE - Correspondence on Jan 05, 2006 05:19 am

Awww... This is definitely sweet, and a fantastic idea. Perfect roles, as well... I'm looking fwd to that ball you mentioned. :oD



Author's Response: Thank you so much. Enjoy the ball! ;)
Name: MJ reviewed CHAPTER THREE - Correspondence on Jan 03, 2006 08:57 pm
It's a great story! Please keep writing and update as fast as you can!!

Author's Response: All done! Thank you for the review!
Name: Ada Achlys reviewed CHAPTER THREE - Correspondence on Jan 03, 2006 06:16 pm
Another great chapter!  Looking forward to more of the story!


Author's Response: Oh thanks! You rock!
Name: Ada Achlys reviewed CHAPTER TWO - Out of Character on Jan 03, 2006 06:10 pm
Lovely chapter.  And the "classic" cliche: "Just as she fell over a pair of strong arms caught her and pulled her towards him. It was Malfoy." -- I'm *obsessed* with this cliche!  Love it, love it, love it.  I think I'm going to write a one-shot where Draco and Ginny reflect on all the injuries they've sustained from running into one another in the halls. :)


Author's Response: You got it! ;) 10 points for you! ;) Isn't this cliche' fabulous? It's almost as common as Ginny and Harry naming their children James and Lily! ;) Thanks for reading! ;)
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed CHAPTER THREE - Correspondence on Jan 03, 2006 11:46 am
I really love this story, It really is a new idea, please continue to update quickly.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad you didn't think the idea was old and over used! ;) The fic is all done now. I hope you've been able to enjoy it! ;)
Name: Lottie reviewed CHAPTER THREE - Correspondence on Jan 03, 2006 09:47 am
Aww! It's so sweet! I love it! I can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Oh Thanks! ;)
Name: archirat reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 03, 2006 02:38 am

I love the idea. I will continue reading, and I would offer my services as a beta...however it appears that my track record as of yet is not perfect.....

YAY! A fanfiction that caters to my to passionate loves...being a geek/dork, and being a sick deviant pervert!



Author's Response: Thank you for the beta offering. I'm done now - but I hope you read the whole thing and enjoyed it! Thank you for the reveiw!
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 02, 2006 07:23 pm
good start :) can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: YAY! I hope you enjoyed it. I've finished it now... I'm just catching up on my reviews! ;)
Name: Lottie reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 02, 2006 07:08 pm
Woops! I clicked the button too soon! So I hope this shows up! This is awesome! Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: *giggles*rnrnI hope you liked the rest of it! Thank you for the review! ;)
Name: moerae reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 02, 2006 02:53 pm
very original...can't wait to see where you with this!


Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you like the end result! ;)
Name: Mirage reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 02, 2006 02:46 pm
Ooooh...I like this plot. I bet Vaina is Ginny (of course) and lots of conflict is going to ensue from this. Wonderful work! Keep writing!

Author's Response: I will and I do. I'm glad you like the plot. I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story! ;)
Name: Akire reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 02, 2006 12:05 pm
OHHH, that was an awesome beginning, i cant wait for the next chapter, but maybe u can put in some of Ginny's perspective of things. ;);)


Author's Response: I SOOO did! I hope you like the rest of the story. Thank you for the review!
Name: Lynda reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 02, 2006 06:51 am
That was a really good start. Please update soon!

Author's Response: It's done. I hope you enjoy! ;) Thanks for the review!
Name: Ada Achlys reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 01, 2006 01:50 pm
Wow.  Love it so far.  This is a great twist on the "inter-house cooperation" storyline -- very original!  Is the game they're playing  based on a real RPG?  I'm totally clueless about them, but it sounds like a neat set-up.  Really looking forward to the next chapter!


Author's Response: Totally NOT based on a real rpg. I actually had no idea how rpgs worked so I had to do some intel on that... but yeah... I'm glad you liked it so far (when you wrote the review ages ago). It's done now... I just wanted to be a good ficwriter and thank my reviewers. Thank you! ;)
Name: Camilla_GoE reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 01, 2006 12:43 pm
apart from being totally bafled at the initial explanation (but that could just be lack of sleep), am VERY intrigued. Ginny's gonna be Vaina, right? RIGHT?

Author's Response: OH NO! The explanation was confusing? I'm sorry about that! I'm glad you enjoyed it though. And yes... Ginny is Vaina! ;)
Name: Michelle reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 01, 2006 12:25 pm
I love it, great idea, can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've finnished it now. I hope you enjoyed it! ;)
Name: Casey reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 01, 2006 09:35 am
not the kind of fic i usually read, but it sounds interesting. i'm looking forward to the next chappie.

Author's Response: It's fairly fluffy -- but thank you for reading and reviewing! ;)
Name: Maximilian Maxwell reviewed PROLOGUE - The Game Begins on Jan 01, 2006 07:12 am
Great Story, go on with it

Author's Response: It's all done. I hope you enjoy. Thanks for the review!
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