Name: LilyLove reviewed
Together on Dec 21, 2006 11:00 am
HOT & STEAMY just like romance is supposed to be. i want a christmas like that
Name: Experience My Dreams reviewed
Together on Apr 13, 2006 06:32 am
Sweet!!! I loved it!!! I was great!!
Name: dgfanatic reviewed
Together on Feb 20, 2006 02:29 pm
i loved it sooo much.
the line " I'll be there to support you," was adorable. good work!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Together on Feb 20, 2006 01:34 am
That was pretty good smut. I'm pleased.
Author's Response: Thanks! Much appreciated.
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Rhina
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Together on Feb 18, 2006 09:32 am
Aawwww.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Together on Feb 17, 2006 06:13 pm
I'm very fond of this. The only thing that bugs me is that they're both so gorgeous. I have a problem with that two. In my head they are both beyond that, but sometimes it begins to sound a little too much like the perfect romance, and that's not very realistic. Just make sure you make them seem a little ugly sometimes (not that their partner needs to think they are. Love is blind - literally). That will help it seem more realistic. Unless, of course, that isn't what you're going for.
Also, they did get together pretty fast, but (if I remember correctly) they were together in school so that would make sense. Just make sure to realize that they didn't get together for the first time in one day. I don't see either of them as shallow enough to shag someone just because they look shaggable.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Together on Feb 17, 2006 04:28 pm
Together...yes, in all the most glorious ways! A most satisfying end to a wonderful fic. Thank you for a most enjoyable ride. -fallenwitch
Author's Response: I am really glad that you enjoyed and read the whole thing. Thanks so much!
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Rhina
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Together on Feb 17, 2006 03:36 pm
It was wonderful! Brilliant! And while I adore it, it would probably be good advice to change the category it's in... it is MOST certainly not NOT NAUGHTY! ;)
Author's Response: *laugh* Thanks for that. It's all fixed now! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Rhina
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Together on Feb 17, 2006 10:02 am
Aw! This was one of the best fics I've ever written!
If I was to give it an award, best written would definitely be one of them.
You are so on my fav. author's list.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Together on Feb 17, 2006 04:04 am
That was quite an end to the story! I loved the sparring and jockeying for position. It did a nice job of building the tension throughout the chapter, which made the smut so much more satisfying. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response: I'm a firm believer in the fact that they would constantly be vying to best the other - whether in the halls of school, on the Quidditch Pitch or in bed. The trial to dominate never ends!
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Rhina