Ahhh!!!! They meet at last...at an evil but oddly satisfying cliffhanger! "The world as I knew it tilted right off its axis" is my favorite line. This chapter was well worth my burnt dinner last night, and I will await your final chapter...the desert in this fic...with anticipation. -fallenwitch
Author's Response:It is satisfying but at the same time, it leaves even me wanting more. So sorry about the burnt dinner though. I'm writing as we speak!
^^ Rhina
Ahhh!!!! They meet at last...at an evil but oddly satisfying cliffhanger! "The world as I knew it tilted right off its axis" is my favorite line. This chapter was well worth my burnt dinner last night, and I will await your final chapter...the desert in this fic...with anticipation. -fallenwitch
I really didn't intend to read your WHOLE story. I just wanted a peek... that one peek lead to another and another and the next thing I knew I was leaning over my computer scene, ignoring the telephone ringing and the supper burning on the stove, so I could find out what happens when Draco shows up on her doorstep... Your first person narrative is well done and your characters are fabulous. I am partial to fics from snarky Draco's POV, and I found the two chapters devoted to his POV were immensely satisfying! My only complaint is that I was flying through this fic at the speed of lightening only to hit a wall and collapse in a pile at the bottom of my computer...chapter 4 is not up yet. Oh well, I will go and eat my burnt supper and wait patiently for your next chapter. Nicely done! -fallenwitch
Author's Response:WOW. Thank you. As someone who gets sucked into fanfics regularly, it is a real compliment to have my own work do that to someone else. And I have a special fondness for snarky!Draco myself so mine are always rather more rude than they are nice. Who wants a nice Draco after all! Chapter 4 should be up as soon as the Cabal has a chance and Chapter 5 is 1/4 way written. Thanks again for the wonderful compliment - it made my whole night!
^^ Rhina
Nice chapter - looking forward to more updates. I think what I like about how you write is the first person seems very realistic to me. Draco's nastiness is still there but obviously tempered with age. Ooooh - will Draco show up for Christmas and see Ginny again?? How will she react?
Author's Response:Thank you for the compliment as I really appreciate it. I really enjoy writing them from their own point of view.
And for that answer you'll have to stay tuned. Just be prepared for a rather unusual Hermione trick...
Aw! He's making excuses! It's great!
Author's Response: Draco lives for excuses right up until the last minute... *g* Glad you're enjoying it.
I am enjoying this story very much. In this chapter, I particularly like the nickname "Greasel". Also, I like the parallel to the first chapter with Draco thinking Hermione has been shagged too much. I'm looking forward to updates!
Author's Response: Greasel was the only name I could come up with. Thanks for the review - thanks.
THis is very interesting. You have a very distinctive writing style which is actually a refreshing change from other wirters. I'm intrigued to see what happens next. I like that Hermione was Draco's secret keeper - as awful as he was to her, I can see that it would be an obvious choice because no one would guess.
Author's Response:Thank you very much for the compliment and I really appreciate what you said as it means a lot to me. I am glad that you are enjoying it. I thought the secret keeper thing worked well though it honestly just came to me out of now where...
Thanks again! ^^ Rhina
That's great! I love it! I want more! Anywho, now that my inner two year old has spoken...
Author's Response: *laugh* I'm glad that you liked it that much!
I love this story, it is so sweet and sad, please update and finish it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it.
*claps happily* Oooh, I love me some nice romance. :D Can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response:Well part 3 is now up and part four is being beta-read. Hopefully part 5 will be written quickly!
Thanks for the review!
This is just full of warm fuzzies, isn't it? I really love that song!
Author's Response: I love it to and it made great inspiration!
this is a really great story - are you planning it to be short or long? Whatever it may please continue.
Author's Response: It depends on your definition of the words. It's going to have about 5 parts total unless the characters end up pulling some kind of stunt on me!